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delicious story~!

This chapter kinda confused me a little. Rai and Gen had sex? Did I miss that chapter? I thought I read it all. I knew there was some kissing and them grinding on each other at the end of their mission but I had no idea they had sex.

haha. they are going to have their hands full with that woman. she will be the death of them. Unless... they actually do get married. wow... that would be interesting. I cant imagine what they would tell Raidou and Genma. *shakes head* this gets more fascinating by the second. And I wonder how Raidou and Genma are handling their situation. Hopefully, more smoothly. At this point, they are so comfortable with each other, you would think that Izumo and Kotetsu actually WERE a couple. Which is what we are going for, but anyway. Can't wait to read more ^_^

that was amazing... truly truly amazing. Izumo waking up with Kotetsu like that was just so steamy and sexy that I was all like 'go ahead go ahead- raido & genma have already taken another step'... and then the LAUNDRYYYYY... lol I just reread that and thought 'no, oh no' lol. I'm awful I know but it was that good that this time I wasn't thinking 'stop not yet' lol. *sigh* and just as good was what came after. Them lying in bed together just holding each other, looking and kissing... that was something special. It showed so much depth of feeling between the two. I swear I am just so in love with this story. Like Vanyel in love which I have read repeatedly (last herald mage series by mercedes lackey)

oh and your welcome :)
what can I say... your story is amazingly wonderful and I was inspired :)

well, so much for faking a couple. I would call that a break of sorts. They are a cute couple though. If only they werent both dating someone else at the moment. The discussions when they get back are going to be very interesting. I can't wait to read it. ^_^

...I dunno weither i should be mad or happy but i do know ur a mean mean mean person and a tease!!! I was like finally!!! tetsu/izumo sexy time!!! after weeks and weeks and weeks of suffering on my part ( since the boys obviously dont care who they get ass from = (....well they do just not with each other -_-)the boys are seconds away from making mad crazy earth shattering passionate sex the freaking LAUNDRY MAID!!! of all ppl kills it!!!(and me) not cool...but i'm happy because it's progress and you feed me enough to last a bit longer for the wait...just how long will that be? putting aside my bitchy rants...I loooove this story XD and ur amazing writer so update soon!!! and THAT was the best almost sex soon in the entire story (bias opinion XD) it beats the full scenes for me

I loved all those touching scenes!!! I'm a big fan of touch :) At breakfast, at the market, in the garden... *sigh* I think their interrupted morning took them to the point where they don't want to hold back showing their feelings even if they are holding back saying their feelings. The mission gives them that freedom and they are finally running with it. It's like they are refusing to think about anything else. I just loved that Kotetsu bought those rings and 'proposed' to Izumo. It's like they just can't help saying all they want even though they keep saying it's for the mission. And now... lol the wedding? *bouncing up and down in excitement*

wooooooow. I come back from a busy weekend and i find three chapters of awesomeness. Well, one side of the relationship has finally broken. though, with that situation, I cant really blame Raidou and Genma. I wonder how they will end u dealing with it. Hm... and how long until Izumo and Kotetsu finally break as well. This is getting so awesome. I can't wait to find out what happens next. ^_^

[ch 18] so beautiful and the LAUNDRY! you dog... ;)

awww... that was sweet. I bet they won't stay on the same side of the bed either lol.
oh and I wrote you something on mine. I couldn't resist, I just love these couples :)