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whew! *fanning self* I do believe my mouth is tingling lol. That chapter 16 was really hot. I continue to be amazed at how awesome this story is. EVERY chapter continues the plot so well and are just so freakin' good. I also loved chapter 15 with Izumo and Kotetsu almost getting married. I really like how it's Izumo who in his mind keeps wanting to push things a little more. It's like he couldn't allow himself to think about it before as a possibility but now that Kotetsu is in a real relationship and Izumo knows that one is possible and that they both have feelings for each other... he just can't help but want to push for more. It's our playboy who is the voice of reason lol.

I like that Raido seems shocked. His feelings are the ones that we've heard from the least which fits him and it's nice to see him kinda blindsided and given a wake up call.

Soooo looking forward to more :)

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I loved this chapter! *fanning self* That scene in the alley was reallly steamy. I love how they can't help but ignite when they touch each other and they forget about everything else. And they admitted they wanted each other! It was reallly sexy how they did that without realizing they were doing that. And I liked that they stopped before they cheated. Oh it's just all wonderful :)

and so the moment has finally happened. they took it quite well, actually. kinda like how Genma and Kotetsu took the realization that they were in love with each other. hm... i wonder how this will turn out. i imagine it will be a little while before the confrontation, because it doesnt seem like a good idea to me for that to happen on the mission. But i suppose we will see.

wow. I go away for the weekend, and come back to a fantastically confusing chapter. Poor Kotetsu is just making things soo hard on them both. It's only at the end that he really thinks of the consequences of his actions, not just on him, but on Izumo. My goodness, he is causing some trouble. But love can do that to people, and he will have a hard time getting through this mission without messing up both of his relationships. I hope it all comes out well, though. I would like for everyone to still be happy, even if Kotetsu is with Izumo and Genma with Raidou. *sigh* I'll have to wait and see what happens.

i love this! this chapter made me laugh their resistence is breaking lol

*sigh* that was such a great chapter. I loved that little kiss Izumo gave Kotetsu on the neck and how Kotetsu can't help wanting to touch Izumo. And I like that thoughts of their boyfriends don't just disappear. It WOULD be hard for them to deal with this at the same time they have left boyfriends they love back home. *fingers crossed* happy ending for everyone... happy ending for everyone

Yaaaay!!! finally!! that what i'm talking about!! tho they need to get over this whole guilt thing...hopefully everything will fall into it's rightfull place soon..the old man sounds adorable...u've made me suffer long enough, yes hot guys going at it is still hot but it means nothing if it's not with the right person! true love is everything!!! which is why izumo tho slow is coming around...srry went alittle crazy there

that kiss was hot :) ...really hot :) ...ok still thinking about it because it was really sexy hot :)

but the DRIVER!... he was listening and they were talking about recon and sleeping on the floor... and ... and... they probably forgot all about that because they are still thinking about the kiss!!! oh... yeah... the kiss :) :) :)

poor Izumo... it all feels so right but he doesn't have any belief that Kotetsu feels the same way other than attraction. I wonder when he'll start to figure out or suspect that it's not acting. And poor Kotetsu is so not going to be able to hide his reactions or resist acting like lovers because this might be his only chance to feel what it's like with Izumo.

Oh... and speaking of hiding reactions... him being mortified during the ride in the cart because he couldn't hide it and Izumo just thinking that he's so glad that he's in front and can hide his... that was so funny lol. I love awkward.:)

*shakes head* oh my. oh my, oh my, oh my. this little mission of theirs will KILL them. And i thought that Genma's and Raidou's mission was bad enough. no. This mission hasn't even begun and they are having trouble maintaining themselves. *sigh* well, i guess the turning point has come. And this is gonna hit them HARD, i can see it coming. I just hope no feelings get hurt. On either side. But we will have to see.

Rising action rising action... Ohhh I see it all coming out!!!! Or at least maybe Izumo getting a bit of a clue. No way Kotetsu will be able to pretend it's all acting. Izumo knows him too well. And Raido must be wondering too. *rubs hands together and cackles gleefully* sooooo good!