rate_review Reviews

Ahh, the plot thickens. This is going to be a very interesting turn of events. I'm not sure how bad it will get after this, but some issues, im sure, will turn up. I can't wait to read it. It will be very interesting. ^_^

*nods* that indeed is the question. I am proud of Genma that he was able to stop what he was doing. We'll see how this ends up. I imagine that a true talk is coming up. It's bound to happen anyway. All of this needs to get decided. I will be sad to see Genma and Kotetsu break up, but the long-lasting attraction that Izumo has had for Kotetsu (and Raidou for Genma) will finally come to light. I think. You are the writer, so I am interested to see how this turns out. ^_^

I love it I love it I love it. Conflict thoughts from Raidou. I'm thinking please don't cheat please don't cheat. I don't think any of the couples could deal with the guilt and it would taint any relationship they would try to have. But ohhhh when it all comes out...it's going to sooooo hit them all. I can't wait! :)

ohmygosh you did it... thank you thank you thank you! sending lots of luv your way!!! I was so excited to see the update.

that was an awesome chapter. I tell you... I feel like starting a cheer section for this story of yours. I worried about how you were going to switch the focus back to Izumo and Kotetsu because it seemed to be so much more intense for Kotetsu but I think you chose the perfect way. I liked how this chapter was from Izumo's point of view and how it showed their past attraction for each other. It also totally makes sense on why he gave up on Kotetsu and seemed so oblivious now. And sexy moment with a wet Kotetsu and turned on Izumo followed by the akward moment... gosh I love those scenes. Really sexy and hot while being so believable with the feelings tied in. I have to admit that sometimes when a story has a lot of PWP I will scan/skip the P to get to the plot lol. But I never do that with this story. Each one of your scenes ties in and continues the plot. Plus they're freakin' hot :)

Gosh I hope Raido has similar thoughts toward Genma because now I'm worried about him being hurt the most. *sigh* now I need to go find a pic of Kotetsu in a towell. :)

Ahh, of course. A mission. Yes, the one constant in a ninja's life that can cause strife, especially in this type of relationship rhombus. And of course, Genma and Raidou would be sent off. This could mean sooo many bad things, on both ends. you already see what's going through Izumo's head. I don't believe the other two will come home to happy times. I hope they do. You already know that I support Genma/Kotetsu, but I guess that it was bound to happen some time. And I'm kinda not happy with Izumo's current thinking about Kotetsu's sex life. Obviously they haven't talked as much as they should have, because we, of course, know that he was not sleeping around for fun. Well, not just for fun. lol. anyway, I guess we'll see how this ends up. I wonder is it as much strife on the Raidou/Genma side as it is on this side.

arrgggg!!! you just haaaaad to put that last line on there didn't you? couldn't leave us feeling all warm and fuzzy with the friends all drunk and getting along... OH nooooooo... that would be too eeeeeasy. now I'm all jittery like...what now... what's going to go wrong now? and JUST when I was getting ready to review about how much I liked the chapter... and how I liked that Tetsu is so protective of Gen and made Raido apologize and how I loved that Gen and Raido got to see how well Kotetsu and Izumo communicate without even trying...(loved those parts)...

but noooooooo.... now I'm just left with...with...(grrr stupid cliffhangers)... you're going to update tomorrow right?... right?...

its nice that they are all back on speaking terms. though, at this point, im not sure which couple i want to survive. i understand what Genma ad Kotetsu are going through,k, but they make such a fantastic couple. I dont really want them to break up, even if it is to be with their original loves, Raidou and Izumo. oh well. i hope this works out okay though, im a little worried about what is about to happen. Hopefully nothing too bad. *fingers crossed*

oooooohhhhh... that was so perfect!!! I love that they figured out and admitted that they love each other. I don't think Raido thinks its serious but I think Izumo realizes it. I really like how they are so wrapped up in each other. Together they are totally hot but it has a real sweetness to it that I adore. I'm glad that they recognize each others feelings so well even the fact that they still love their best friends. I so don't know how this is going to turn out but I love the story and these characters as you've written them.

I have SOO much love for this story. this is a couple that I don't usually read, but have just gotten into. And this story is cementing them for me. Absolutely fantastic. These two. Genma and Kotetsu are men after my own heart. Because I completely understand how it is to have conflicting feelings like that. They are a fantastic couple though. I can't wait to find out what happens next. This story just keeps getting better. ^_^

I love it. Obsessively checking for updates. Thanks.