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June 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well, I feel bad for Sasuke, but I love Itachi's sadistic-ness. I'm torn between loving this fic and having an unhealthy obsession that may lead to stalking.
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May 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
great stuff!! you gotta continue this story!!! i wanna know what happens to poor ol' sasuke:(
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May 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please oh please continue with that. Please oh please oh please with sugar on top?
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May 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
If you do decide to continue this, I think it'd be awesome if, for once, the bad guy (if there must be a bad guy) isn't the jilted lover (in this case, Sasuke), but rather the current lovers (Naruto & Itachi). The common scenario is to make Sasuke the worst boyfriend that ever existed so that anything Naruto & Itachi do to him comes across as deserved and justified, but I always find scenarios like that to be cliched and depressing. (Cliched because ex-lovers are always made out to be bad people who were 100% at fault for a break up instead of the main character also sharing some blame--which is the more realistic scenario, & depressing because it's always sad to see "good" characters stoop to a "bad" character's levels.) Besides, if Naruto & Itachi are so tactless/cruel as to unwittingly involve Sasuke in their sex games (especially if Itachi found "perverse satisfaction" in knowing his actions were going to torture Sasuke!), then they can't be very nice people to begin with, ya know?
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May 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hopefully Sasuke really deserved to lose Naruto or they get back together. But that was good.
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May 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
there better be a next part to this cause that was incredibly hot and evil. I can't wait
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May 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
:-( poor Sasuke
but HOT.
but HOT.
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May 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am not a big Sasuke fan and ItaNaru is just about my favorite pairing. That being said, I actually feel a bit bad for Sas and can't help but wonder what he did to deserve that. You definitely grabbed my attention.
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May 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aww.. what the heck Itachi, poor Sasuke...
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May 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey, this was pretty good but I can't help but feel you ended it too quickly...maybe another chapter would do...even though you originally said it was a oneshot. You could even turn it into a bigger multichap if you chose...giving a full back story and a 'what happen's next' kind of thing. Anyway, great fic and I do hope there's more to come.