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May 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
VERY COOL! Though I'm a bit confused I think its because I haven't read the manga... i am loving the whole pregnant thing though... poor Naruto, I really hope Sakura doesn't totaly lose it on Naruto when she finds out.
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May 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I dont know what to say, Im glad you updated, I read this chapter on ff.net along with some of your other fics like this one ->http://naruto.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600095418, I hope to see more of your fics soon. I cant wait to find out what happens next in this fic <3
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May 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great! I hope there is more!
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May 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh wow I love how this is going and although some stories are good to give lots of detail and drag it on a bit I love that you are not doing this as there is a LOT to go threw in the manga from the time frame you are using and I am worried, Sasuke did what he did to make Naru happy and give him something to love and love him back, but will he really destroy Naruto and the piece of him that lives on with Naruto?? I cant wait to find out and to see when Naruto finally finds out that it WASNT a dream and the little suprise Sasuke left him, and totally loving the interaction with Karin and Suigetsu but I would love it if Sasuke finally told Karin straight out that she is anoying and he is gay lol, would love to see her face, thank you for the read and cant wait for more, huggles and smiles Mija..
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May 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying your story so far. This second chapter wasn't confusing to read because I think you have chosen the right parts of the manga to put there without being too descriptive.
Looking forward to see more!
Looking forward to see more!
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May 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
If the problem with Naru is what I think it is then Sasuke will have to rethink that whole let Naru die thing, and that whore he travels with finally get the hint that Sasuke will never want her used ass!!!!!!!!!
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May 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Its not confusing per se...
But the chapter was good. You didn't need to tell us what chapter of the manga you were writing from. But I'd like to see more. :)
But the chapter was good. You didn't need to tell us what chapter of the manga you were writing from. But I'd like to see more. :)
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May 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I think if you've read the manga it's not confusing. I had no trouble understanding it because I knew what each part referred to. Makes me wonder about when you'll stop following the manga and why, though. Hopefully Sasuke will accept Naruto's light in his darkness... I'm looking forward to when they meet again. Also, was there some hint of Kakashi/Iruka in this chapter? I actually thought when it happened in the manga that the author was giving some fanservice to all who support that couple. :) (because Kakashi and Iruka are very rarely seen together in the manga otherwise, even though they have lots of shippers)
And is the mpreg not certain now? I do hope it happens, particularly because of what it will mean for Sasuke and Naruto's relationship (that and their baby would undoubtedly be quite cute). This would be one bond that Sasuke would certainly have trouble breaking since reviving his clan used to be one of his goals. Plus, it seems that Sasuke's (or is it Itachi's?) jutsu had some effect on Naruto. But maybe it just gave him the ability to carry children and Sasuke still has to impregnate him? It does indeed raise the question of why Itachi would have such a scroll. Particularly if it works only on a jinchuuriki (but does it?). By the way, why would the Kyuubi hide it? Could he want Naruto to get pregnant? Or it could be something else completely.
I also liked the idea that Naruto and Sasuke think about each other when watching the moon. At least it's not only associated with creepy Madara (who seems to be a pervert too - should Sasuke watch his back?). Although I think that all that sexual frustration can't be good for Sasuke. That guy is really too repressed. He should take example from Naruto and at least indulge in fantasies if he can't have the real thing (or until he can have it). :)
And is the mpreg not certain now? I do hope it happens, particularly because of what it will mean for Sasuke and Naruto's relationship (that and their baby would undoubtedly be quite cute). This would be one bond that Sasuke would certainly have trouble breaking since reviving his clan used to be one of his goals. Plus, it seems that Sasuke's (or is it Itachi's?) jutsu had some effect on Naruto. But maybe it just gave him the ability to carry children and Sasuke still has to impregnate him? It does indeed raise the question of why Itachi would have such a scroll. Particularly if it works only on a jinchuuriki (but does it?). By the way, why would the Kyuubi hide it? Could he want Naruto to get pregnant? Or it could be something else completely.
I also liked the idea that Naruto and Sasuke think about each other when watching the moon. At least it's not only associated with creepy Madara (who seems to be a pervert too - should Sasuke watch his back?). Although I think that all that sexual frustration can't be good for Sasuke. That guy is really too repressed. He should take example from Naruto and at least indulge in fantasies if he can't have the real thing (or until he can have it). :)
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May 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oohhhh i love it, I bet i know why naruto's acting strange, Sasuke knocked him up. ... LOL i love it and i want more please update soon, <333
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May 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
We so need to have sense knocked in to Sasuke. He's planning on killing off Naruto along with the rest of the village? arrrgggg!!!!
not too jumpy & yes it made sense, more soon! :)
not too jumpy & yes it made sense, more soon! :)