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May 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is a really cute story! Please continue you it, at least for a few chapters. Maybe the next chapter could be when they are older teens and their relationship becomes more intimate. And then the chapter after could be their wedding. <3
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May 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
aahm no no, i dont believe this is done at all lol
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May 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wOw! I loved what Sasuke did to Miss Pink! Just one time while watching the anime I would have love for Naruto to NOT take crap from her just once or for Sasuke to stick up for him. Thank you! But you know now that I wrote that. It wouldn't be Naruto if he had ever talked back or fought back would it?! Sorry I got off track there:) I totally enjoyed your story. As you can tell it made me think! ^_^
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May 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This can't be complete. There needs to be more. There has to be a sequel,you just can't leave it ended like that, that's sooo unfair. I sooo want to know what Sakura's punishment, how Sasuke and Naruto relationship turns from this point. Ack! So many questions left unanswered. Please write more.
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May 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this was really good, but I feel like there should be more...like a part two. It just feels incomplete like something else was supposed to happen. Maybe another chapter would wrap it up? But should you decide to leave it like this thats fine too.
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May 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aww that was so cute I hope you write a second part where Sasuke Naruto actually get together xD
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May 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!
It was cute, and sweet.
Sasuke was such a girl at the beginning, decorative towels, heh. Naruto oblivious as usual, but adorable in his idiocy.
Sakura is a bitch, yup, 'nuff said.
How could anyone think that Naruto would ever be anyone's dirty secret. The thought alone makes me want to cry.
Anyway, as for the writing. I have to say, you've gotten so much better over time. Following your stories, you can really see the difference.
Keep it up!
It was cute, and sweet.
Sasuke was such a girl at the beginning, decorative towels, heh. Naruto oblivious as usual, but adorable in his idiocy.
Sakura is a bitch, yup, 'nuff said.
How could anyone think that Naruto would ever be anyone's dirty secret. The thought alone makes me want to cry.
Anyway, as for the writing. I have to say, you've gotten so much better over time. Following your stories, you can really see the difference.
Keep it up!
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May 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I want to see Skankura stripped of her medic and shinobi status and after being forced to watch Sasuke and Naruto marry thrown in jail for attacking a fellow leaf ninja out of jelousy!!!!!!!!
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May 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Fan girl Sakura is bloody scary and to actively try and hurt a team mate like that... oh yeah, disciplinary action is definately in order.
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May 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
D'awww... That was so, so cute. The fic really left you with a pleasant feeling in the end. I think the nicest part was that Sasuke chose to show his feelings to the world via a throw that his mother had made for him. What symbolizes family better than something left behind by Sasuke's mother from his childhood? The sentimental value in an object like that totally eclipses something more conventional like a shirt or a ring. Very nice job. :)