rate_review Reviews

mwahahaha. it's going to be hella fun seeing how long Naru can hold out. Though Sas sure ain't being subtle, that's for sure.

I'm enjoying this story. I'm rooting for Naruto... I hope Sasuke DOESN'T manage to get Naruto to sleep with him during those two weeks. Then Sasuke can obsess over why he's still thinking of Naruto and track him down after the job is done. Wouldn't want Sasuke to always get his way now would we? lol I like a Sasuke that has to work for it lol.

One suggestion... paragraphs! Hit return once in awhile so it doesn't become one huge paragraph. That makes it kind of hard to read. However sometimes the spacing gets messed when posting so it might not even be you making it that way!

omg.
i cant wait for more.
update soon.
and separate chapter 3.
its annoying when people leave it bunched like that.
i love this fic so far.
XD.

~Golden Kitsune~

Any chance you could do something about the formatting of chapter 3? All I see is a big block of text that is really hard to read, and I'd really like to read this chapter because the story is a really nice read, minor grammar mistakes aside.

O dear god, I WANT MORE, this is incredibly funny and hilarious, Perverted sasuke is always hilarious.. and i love younger seme, I cant wait to read more <3

Your grammar wasnt bad at all.

Much love, Chynna18rawrr

I really like this story, I hope to see an update soon! Cant wait for more dirty Sasuke!!!

lol Sasuke is so not done with his teasing. Naruto is soooo in for it lol :)

Heh, struggle all you like Naru. He'll get you pretty pretty and your little boxers too. mwhahaha.
Still, it'll be interesting to see how long he can hold out before Sas gets him.

hehe I like Sasuke-kun so much in this story, I just know the plot will get juicy-- it definitely has the potential to ;) :)

anyways you did a good job of giving us a good reason Sasuke wouldnt want to stay with Kisame- how gross *cringe*
~

cute :)