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person ChatNoir

schedule October 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM

I have to say, I find the start of this story really interesting. I don't normally go on this site anymore, but I will start to again to keep checking back on this story. It's an interesting premise, and I am curious to see where it goes. I hope you continue it. Good work, keep writing.

person moodysavage

schedule July 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM

*looking around* tap tap tap (against the computer screen) anyone there? anyone? sasuke's memory is gone and naruto is sad :(

person TheMadKatter13

schedule June 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM

Gahhhh!!!! Why is there no more! It was so interesting!

person nivell

schedule May 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM

I like where there is going! It's interesting to see how they hated each other and grew to become lovers when they're older. I noticed some typos and missing apostrophes but they were minor.

person tawanawelch

schedule May 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM

Wow!! When I saw this I wondered how I missed seeing it. I started reading the first chapter and was hooked!!! I like that this about Sasuke cuz it's usually about Narutobeing the victim. I'm glad Nejislady is a friend in this I get kinda tired of him being a hated rival.:). I can't wait for more reaction from Sasuke when he finds out more about he and Naruto. I love this story already!!!X3

person tawanawelch

schedule May 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM

LMBO!! My iPhone made a 'correction' when I typed Neji, it automatically said my name sorry. Also, in the end of my review I said he instead of him. I hate my mistakes!>.<

person missbri88

schedule May 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM

Oh you tease me with these shorty chapters! I can't wait for more and to see how Sasuke and Naruto came together after such an implied hateful past. *holds up bowl* More Please?!

person Kirstymaria

schedule May 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM

this story is awesome. I love Narusasu and the fact that Sasuke lost seven years of his life seems exciting especially since he and Naruto used to hate each other. I hope Naruto and convince Sasuke of their love. please update soon,

person Carousel

schedule May 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM

I love this story so far. It is original and intriguing. Please update soon!

person Danyealle

schedule May 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM

Please correct your disclaimer

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