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for Seven

by SoulOrchard

schedule May 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh definitely more....soon soon soon soon soon!:)
person conrada7
schedule May 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Idk what the heck the idiots who gave you only 3 stars were thinking. They must have not read the same story that I did, because the story that I just read was incredibly interesting and has so much potential!!! I can't wait to read more so please keep updating!!! =D
*5 stars!!!!*
person Anon
schedule May 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
okay i'm confused......sasuke has been in a coma with possible brain damge for seven years right?? so how could he have been with naruto for the last five years and been living together with him for the last two years????

or is it that he just now woke up from an accident that happened recently and he thinks he is back in 2004??? i like the idea for the story, but you need a beta to help you make the story more fluid.

keep working hard!
schedule May 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm looking forward to seeing more. :)