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October 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Good stuff. I cried. LOL
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May 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Pretty much cried the whole lase half of that. Loved it, totally loved it. :')
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May 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was truly intense and sad but I'm also happy they confessed to eachother. That was definitely a tearjerker. I loved this.T.T
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May 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What I didn't like about the story:
it's mainly from Naruto's perspective, so "Naruto knows best" principle is at work everywhere.. Naruto, Naruto, Naruto - too much of him in this battle, which is not only 'his, btw :) Naruto is strangely over-prepared, planning everything beforehand (which is very strange:)) Everything except for his good friends wanting to kill Sasuke off :)
You keep on uniting Naruto & Sasuke as if they were one ('they', 'them' etc), but in fact you left Sasuke out, altogether. You've lost him in this story, focusing only on Naruto, his memories and emotions.
Who said Sasuke felt the same about their ex-team? About Naruto? (love) That it was not Sasuke's pain, his decisions but only orochimaru's fault?
And when Sasuke (finaly!!!) got to deliver a final blow - oops! - he sudenly starts to confess his love for Naruto.. dying.
"Just tell that you love me: - hm, it's sweet, it's romantic but I JUST hope Kishimoto-san will make it better and more real.
it's mainly from Naruto's perspective, so "Naruto knows best" principle is at work everywhere.. Naruto, Naruto, Naruto - too much of him in this battle, which is not only 'his, btw :) Naruto is strangely over-prepared, planning everything beforehand (which is very strange:)) Everything except for his good friends wanting to kill Sasuke off :)
You keep on uniting Naruto & Sasuke as if they were one ('they', 'them' etc), but in fact you left Sasuke out, altogether. You've lost him in this story, focusing only on Naruto, his memories and emotions.
Who said Sasuke felt the same about their ex-team? About Naruto? (love) That it was not Sasuke's pain, his decisions but only orochimaru's fault?
And when Sasuke (finaly!!!) got to deliver a final blow - oops! - he sudenly starts to confess his love for Naruto.. dying.
"Just tell that you love me: - hm, it's sweet, it's romantic but I JUST hope Kishimoto-san will make it better and more real.
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May 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
UHHH... that stole some tears. Beautiful heart wrenching and SO sad... but so fucking like them!! BLAHHH
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May 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
AWwWWWWwwwww!!!! THAT WAS SOOO CUTE!!!! ( Q///Q) -teary face-
I just love how the story just fell together! You really made an awesome story mommy!! ;D
LOVE YOU AND MISS YOU!!! :D
I just love how the story just fell together! You really made an awesome story mommy!! ;D
LOVE YOU AND MISS YOU!!! :D