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for Hair Ties And Shirts

by SumiHatake

person Denilmo
schedule August 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! It was so hot and cute and dear gods the sexin :D
I really like this pair and you did a great job with them. Thanks for sharing!
schedule July 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was wonderful, refreshing and funny. Of course it also Hot and Steamy.*drools*
person Anise
schedule May 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I was sitting in the yard a couple of days ago making up stories for my niece about the fae that lived in the garden and played in the trees - there was no mention of the stealing of hair ties but it would explain where the hell they all go :) Also I have to say that if this is the way your hubby acts after how many years together I'd count yourself lucky since most just guys want you to get dressed already so we can go. Of course we shouldn't tell him that, might go to his head ;)

Very hot, very steamy, very perfect! ^_^
person Denilmo
schedule May 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was really amazing. Kakashi & Iruka is a bit of a guilty pleasure of mine and it's been a long time since I have read a really hot, well written piece of KakaIru fic.
I really enjoyed it and I thought that the way they interacted with each other was very fun -and steamy- to read.
For some reason I really liked the little description about his toes curling on one of the drawers. For some reason that little detail was really sexy and I love that you included that :)
Thanks for sharing, it was great!

-Deni
schedule May 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Odd how little Kakashi cares about his stollen shirt once he's good and laid. LOL I'm assuming this is a phemomenon all couples go through... even now I steal my husband's t-shirts to the extent that he wonders if I have any shirts of my own. LOL and in high school my boyfriend had a collection of hair ties that filled one of those glass gallon pickle jars. *smirks* Ahh fond memories.

This was sweet and hot and I really liked it. I'm laid up in bed after a painful procedure and this really made me smile.
person lo
schedule May 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was fun. I liked the dynamic of their relationship, it made me grin.