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by MisatosPenPen

person Anonymous
schedule November 12, 2016 at 12:00 AM

This tugged my heart strings and hit so many kink buttons at the same time.

person Lily
schedule November 12, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Eh, I am reading this and I am one of those perverts that do enjoy het as much as yaoi and yuri, I would love to see Sasuke get at Sakura as well, maybe make Sakura and Kakashi perform in front o fhim.

person Lily
schedule November 12, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Seriously, I would love to see Sasuke throughly violate Sakura as well.

person Sassynu
schedule September 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh my sweetness, just when you didn't see that loving moment coming there it was! I thought aw man another unfinished story but happy day it was updated. I agree you can't rush the goods and boy was it from beginning to end I loved it. I really liked Naruto's deep thinking about his reason for wanting to save Sasuke, I'm a huge cat person so the little stray is a nice touch. I can't wait to see where this story goes now, and with so much more of the manga exposed I wonder if any of that will be incorporated.
person sassynu
schedule July 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this story is amazing. At first I wasn't sure I'd be in for the Kakashi torture but I read on and on and it was so good and kept getting better, your writing style is incredible how it paints the picture and gives the reader some pretty good visual, ans when Sasuke was telling his Orochimaru rape story pure genius, so well written I loved it! I don't know how it's gonna end but I'm very intrigued, the slow build up of emotions on kakashi's part was great too. Can't wait for more this story is a very refreshing change from what I'm used to reading it's dark and deep and all kinds of good stuff that leaves the reader thinking about it later.
person Anon
schedule April 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Best Yaoi story I've read. Characterizations are beautiful. Very well-written. A couple typos, nothing that detracts from the story. Can't wait to read more~
person Lady9
schedule October 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I was extemely excited to see another chapter. I'm so glad you listened to my review. It worked great and I am anticipating what the project is. I don't know if I'm more curious about the project or of naruto seeing sasuke again. I don't see how the next chapter could be dull at all with how much tension has been built up. Since reading your story I have updated myself on all of the anime of naruto and some of the later manga. I don't mind the different twist you story took because you didn't know about author's intentions. It just adds to the creativity of your fanfiction. You are a fantastic writer and I hope my degree will be a bit more than a piece of paper that costed thousands of dollars. LOL
schedule September 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 12. It's nice to see Sasuke with a conscience.

Update soon, okay.
person qwerty
schedule September 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see you updated!! Incredible to see the change in Sasuke. Can't wait to see what his project is!

Keep going! Great chapter :)
schedule September 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Naruto is an asshole and Sakura is a bitch, that's all I have to say about them. Now on to Sasuke, I can't believe I'm saying this but you better live. You better not let those assholes kill you and Kashi!