rate_review Reviews

I first started reading your story yesterday. I just finished chapter 11 and want more! Focusing as a critic, since I am a creative writing major :P, your character development thoughout these chapters has been flawless. I have truly felt the characters grow and change in a unique, but not overly done, way. The story has a major dark stream to it, yet it is completely tasteful. The suspence has been consistent which is why it took me only two days to read (would have been one but work interfered).

I would like to see more about the outside characters by this point because Kakashi and Sasuke's relationship seems well defined. Unless of course you mean to reveal Sasuke's "hobby" in the next chapter in which case I doubt readers will get bored at all. The writing itself is clear and easily understood, even for someone like me who has only seen some Naruto and not all of it. This is a great story and I love the yaoi but appiciate even more the creative and fasinating story line included in the sex. Some people will never understand that sex is nothing without a good story pushing it along. Wonderful job and I look forward to reading more!

*SQUEAL* I COMMAND THEE TO WRITE MORE!!! *POINTS A GIANT FINGER AT.* I wanna know what happens next. :3:3 I absolutely LOVE how dark and twisted Sasuke is in this story. *RESISTS FANGIRL SQUEAL*

I love how possessive and dark/evil sasuke is in this story. don't see that too often.good read

Oh my, the whole oro-thing was creepy, creepy 'good' but creepy, very nicely written and the whole angry Sasuke, so cute and completely understandable (I had wondered about some of those things myself as well), I haven't completely forgiven Kakashi for his shift in the original yet either. Also we got some answers to 'wonders' in the story too, you make me a very happy fan. I don't mind that the fic is getting longer than expected btw, keep your art coming, it inspires my dreams (quite literally sometimes, fingers crossed it won't be oro).

ch. 10 Oh, Sasuke-kun!

Yay new chappie and so soon, not to mention long. I really like the descriptive details that you put in this chapter. Like the stubble, an Uchiha with a beard would indeed be a strange sight. I wonder what Sasuke chafed off the statue, could it be the secret of Madara/Tobi or whomever that guy really is? Looking forward to more.

[ch 9] What a fascinating and unique story! I'm waiting for Kaka-Sensei to find out that Sasuke was his cat... ;)

lol thanks for the welcome and i guess ill just have to get use to the cliffies (detest them so much) but ill try very hard to be patient ..........'........;..............,............>..... ohhhhhhhhhh who am i kidding ill be begging by tommorow morning actually i was trying so hard not to read this chappie cause i knew once i finished i would be sad but sadly that only lasted about two and a half hour heeeyyyyy thats a record for me lolololololololo
anyway back on track, why do i get the feeling that theres more to these cats than meets the eyes and i think i might have a clue as to what that is im so excited ahhhhhh plus excuse me while i scream but was kakashi realy contemplating the l word aaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh this is getting better by the min and i love how mysterious sasuke has remained so far but how long will that last. im on edge here.
please come back soon
-Hollow_

nooooooooooooooooooooooo how could you leave us hanging like this just when it was getting gooooddddd aaaaaaaaahhhhhhh boy does kakashi have some xplaning to do please come back soon

-your as of now new fan

I thought desperation was all they had.Glad to be wrong.