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for Hopelessly

by MisatosPenPen

person Ikke
schedule July 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay update... I was quite dissapointed with the episode this week (i don't even really remember what it was about), but this chapter made it all better. Though i am wondering, are you ever going tot tell us what happenend between Sasuke and Naruto?
person qwerty
schedule July 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Good story! Keep going!
person JamieGib
schedule July 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, but, I just find your story creepy...and not in a good way. This relationship between Sasuke and Kakashi creeps me out, more so since I figure it's going to end with them 'madly desiring' each other to the exclusion of everybody else. Your Kakashi's being very level-headed about it, but when I read in the back of my mind I'm going "ewww...", and this whole Sasuke on a power trip thing through sex just doesn't ring true. Sasuke's a cold bastard and forming a relationship like this with anyone would only weaken him, so I can't see that as happening. I don't know why...but I'm just not getting into this.
person Ikke
schedule June 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that is one of the best 'rape' scenes I have ever read, simple and not melo-dramatic... And you were right about the HET-thing, don't like it, though you didn't make anything explicit. I am so happy that someone choose to write a fic so close to the real-time story, it keeps me satisfied while waiting for the new episodes... I sooo want to see Sasuke's Eternal Mangekyô Sharingan ^.^
person cynaga
schedule June 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is the kind of story you have to read even though it's disturbing. You're brave to take this plot on.
person cynaga
schedule June 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is killing me but I can't wait for more! So painful to read Kakashi so desperate at Sasuke's hands.
schedule May 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I tried to enter the poll but it would not show up.I was wondering if you could recheck it Thank you.