rate_review Reviews

I like the idea so far but the issues with naruto and sakura kinda ruin it for me. i know you said you are developing a plot and that is part of it. i am hoping that the issues will get resolved soon otherwise i don't think i can read it.

i was wondering if there are going to be pairings like narutoxsakura. like the story.

Haha,Sakura. I always knew she had it in her!

Hot premise, but you need more detail in your sex scenes for them to be actually hot - saying 'Those two over there are fucking, as are those two, and thems etc etc' isn't sexy at all. It's boring.

Go into a little detail, small things like movement, positions, sounds, smells, expressions or even feelings. It makes the reader think the people acting like little sluts are actual PEOPLE, and not some imaginary idea.

Looking forward to lots of promiscuous sex on everyone's behalf, maybe even some flashbacks of Minato, Kushina, Mikoto, Fugaku etc doing similar activities? And /gasp, maybe even some partner swapping?!

While this story sounds good, the only thing we saw here was Sakura blowing that stuck up kid. Will there be more? When Hinata or other kunoichi (but especially Hinata) will be subjected to the things in the disclaimer?

what?!? what?!? what's next? arrggg!!!!

HA!!! now we are talking!!! great job. im really looking forward to next chapters. you should consider putting this on fanfiction.com btw. i think ud get way more reviews.

awwww... that was so awesome!!! I can see how they were thinking and I agree... I would hate for Naruto to be stuck so soon with not being able to go out on missions. And I'm so glad for Naruto!!! Poor Kakashi... stuck being Hokage lol.

first chapter very unexpected lol... second chapter I have no idea where you're going with this... hopefully sasunaru/narusasu? (fingers crossed) :)

Funny as hell! Making the sex hotter while keeping the comedy is the only thought for improvement I can think of. Keep up the great work and please update as soon as you can!