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June 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
a good start or a nice shot, i had a great time !! thank
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June 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really like this one. ^_^ I hope you at least do one more. I think it should be from Naruto's point of view of the same situation. I love to know what was going in his mind.
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June 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
would be nice to have more but is good as a stand alone.
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June 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So, wheree are they exactly. i though they did most of thei brawling outside?
Dunno about other peeps but I'd like to know how they got into that sitch... and what now? Does this mean he gets to take Sas home (though i get the feeling he'd gut anyone who tried to take Sas, for punishment or whatever. :P)
Dunno about other peeps but I'd like to know how they got into that sitch... and what now? Does this mean he gets to take Sas home (though i get the feeling he'd gut anyone who tried to take Sas, for punishment or whatever. :P)
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June 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh!! That made me so Hott n completely insatiable wanting More!!! Next chapter up in another day, please? LOL Thank you so much.x3
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June 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this should definitely be more than a one shot.
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June 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awesome oneshot PWP, but I'm curious to see more...?
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June 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Uh yeah, this is really hot and want more please! I love the image of Sasuke tied to Naruto's knott!
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June 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well, this one was certainly different with Naruto's animal side coming out. I liked it though. It was nice seeing a NaruSasu from you. :) As for whether or not you should continue, I think you should leave it as-is as a oneshot. It works well as PWP, but I don't see enough plot to continue. (Naruto won and Sasuke accepted it. Problem solved?)
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June 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh My!! Blush!!! Wicked Grin!! =) That was very hot and damn....... what a luck Uchiha he should have no complaints after that....lol....I just love how possessive Naruto is over him....its so SWEET!!! LOVE IT!!
Have to chuckle over what the Uchiha plans to do to him once he recovers....lol....maybe it'll be his turn next??? One could hope!! VERY WICKED GRIN!!
Have to chuckle over what the Uchiha plans to do to him once he recovers....lol....maybe it'll be his turn next??? One could hope!! VERY WICKED GRIN!!