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for Under the Desert Sun and Moon

by Royality

schedule June 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well, thsat was unexpected... still, how will that work with both going to be leadeers of their respective villages they wouldn't have much time together and what about kids? Where would they stay?
schedule June 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
really sweet... and it ended so fast. 0.o
At any rate, I loved Sas diary and i can't wait for the next installment.
schedule June 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aw, this is such a sweet chapter. Sasuke is just so adorable! ♥ I want to snuggle him to death :3

Update soon!
schedule June 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
awww... insecure Sasuke is so cute :)
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schedule June 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It was wonderful! Funny, sexy and intense!! I'm looking forward to the next happenings of their life's ^_^
schedule June 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I so love this. I really really loved reading Sasuke's journal. I love how they have turned to each other and you've shown how their LIVES have changed on a daily basis. It's so sweet and fun to read.
schedule June 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love Sakura in this story! You actually made her into a human being. Love this chapter.

Love Sasuke's attitude in this fic. Keep up the great work! :D
schedule June 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Poor Gaara... stuck with someone who can't love him because she's always fixated on Sasuke. I'm glad she knows about Naruto and Sasuke though :)
schedule June 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
not bad for their first time together. IT COULD HAVE BEEN A Lot more awkward. I'm guessing this is going to happen a liot more often now. I wonder if they;ll trade off. ^^
schedule June 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love this chapter! Keep up the great work. Did I ever tell you about you great updating skills? :D