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September 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm sooooooooooooooooooooooo glad you are continuing to write this story!!! :3
So, there's a play on the ''9kitsune'' that hasn't been done before. Like a reverse, where Naruto is imprisoned? At least at times.. And this is all a dream somehow? Interesting.. and where it goes from here? A little confusing on it's own, but I have faith that it will come together with further chapters. ALSO, memory loss on Sasuke's behalf??? //Aaah.. the plot - she is thick - with many wonders yet to be revealed.// (said in a gypsy fortune teller voice)
wow. Tanali-san, I hope you update soon.
So, there's a play on the ''9kitsune'' that hasn't been done before. Like a reverse, where Naruto is imprisoned? At least at times.. And this is all a dream somehow? Interesting.. and where it goes from here? A little confusing on it's own, but I have faith that it will come together with further chapters. ALSO, memory loss on Sasuke's behalf??? //Aaah.. the plot - she is thick - with many wonders yet to be revealed.// (said in a gypsy fortune teller voice)
wow. Tanali-san, I hope you update soon.
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August 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh my gosh I absolutely love your writing style. Your descriptions and plot blend seamlessly and I love how this is all told from Sasuke's POV. It's like something has made Sasuke forget Naruto? I suspect someone has been messing with their reality or something and the only one who remembers is Naruto though Sasuke did remember his name at the end. But the arm through the chest!?@! Noooooo!!!!!!! I know Sasuke won't die but.... nooooooo!!! You ended there? Right there? *evil wonderful author... evil*
u...r...awesome. May your plot bunnies give you no rest until you commit them to print.
u...r...awesome. May your plot bunnies give you no rest until you commit them to print.
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August 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Liking where this is going! Hope to see more soon.
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August 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!
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August 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow I really like this story so far!!! Although I really have no idea why Naruto is in that stone and at the same time that thing!!!! I really don't get what is going on but I really love this story non the less!!!! I hope to hear from you soon!!!
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August 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This last chapter confused me a bit. :/ I can't wait for the next one though. Update soon~
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August 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great! Update soon please.
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July 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love AU interpretations of series. And this beginning sounds really promising!
There really isn't enough stuff out there that has these characters as adults/adult'ish, so triple kudos for that~
A dominant Naruto is definitely appealing, and this whole mystery aspect is rather intriguing. I really look forward to the story's progression!~ :)
Good luck dear! Please keep writing~~~
Joanna K.
There really isn't enough stuff out there that has these characters as adults/adult'ish, so triple kudos for that~
A dominant Naruto is definitely appealing, and this whole mystery aspect is rather intriguing. I really look forward to the story's progression!~ :)
Good luck dear! Please keep writing~~~
Joanna K.
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June 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yes, Sasuke's definitely very OOC. I think a real ninja of his level would have caught much more info about his lover.. even against his own will. Does Naruto live in an absolutely isolated unknown place so that Sasuke cannot identify him by any means?.. At all?
Very.. strange. Not ninja-like, I'd say.
More to Sasuke's OOC-ness: he's so submissive, easily led, shy - like a child. Why to give Naruto all advantages over him? It's not fair and interesting. Again, Naruto = 'a prince of the forest'? I see you've already decided that the guys won't be equals or rivals..
I prefer the original characters and relationship.
Good luck with your story.
Very.. strange. Not ninja-like, I'd say.
More to Sasuke's OOC-ness: he's so submissive, easily led, shy - like a child. Why to give Naruto all advantages over him? It's not fair and interesting. Again, Naruto = 'a prince of the forest'? I see you've already decided that the guys won't be equals or rivals..
I prefer the original characters and relationship.
Good luck with your story.
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June 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The OOCness is very intriguing and I'm excited to see more.