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June 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is a really interesting scenario you've written here. I'm not sure what to make of the fact that Sasuke has fallen for someone who won't let him even look at him. Part of me wants to tell him he's crazy for going along with everything, and part of me thinks he should listen to Naruto. (I remember the old fairytale about the man whose wife told him to never look at her when she was bathing and the terrible consequences when he disobeyed.) And then there's the second paragraph of the summary: "The war is over and all is well in the world. Everything is perfect. Right? So why can't anyone remember what happened during the war? When that perfect world comes crashing down, who will be left standing?" Hmmm... So is this alternate universe not actually an alternate universe after all?
The scene between Naruto and Sasuke was really sexy, especially despite how careful both were to make sure Sasuke didn't look at Naruto, how they still managed to touch as much as possible. I guess it really shows how much Sasuke trusts Naruto that when he woke up sore and naked and in Naruto's bed that it didn't cross his mind that Naruto might have done something to him in his sleep. (Because seriously, why did he have to have even his underwear removed?)
I had a question though, in your A/N at the end, you said "The story contains more than just NaruSasu, but they're the ones that I want to focus on." Do you mean there will be multiple side pairings? (Honestly, not really a fan of that--I'm usually apathetic of the side pairings and find they distract from the main pair/main plot.) Or did you mean there will be a larger overall plot in addition to the romance? (I *am* a fan of that.)
Really looking forward to seeing how you develop this!
The scene between Naruto and Sasuke was really sexy, especially despite how careful both were to make sure Sasuke didn't look at Naruto, how they still managed to touch as much as possible. I guess it really shows how much Sasuke trusts Naruto that when he woke up sore and naked and in Naruto's bed that it didn't cross his mind that Naruto might have done something to him in his sleep. (Because seriously, why did he have to have even his underwear removed?)
I had a question though, in your A/N at the end, you said "The story contains more than just NaruSasu, but they're the ones that I want to focus on." Do you mean there will be multiple side pairings? (Honestly, not really a fan of that--I'm usually apathetic of the side pairings and find they distract from the main pair/main plot.) Or did you mean there will be a larger overall plot in addition to the romance? (I *am* a fan of that.)
Really looking forward to seeing how you develop this!
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June 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow...just...wow... that was absolutely phenomenal. Well, you said you haven't written in awhile... you have soooo not lost your touch and after this I'm going to check if you left up any of your old stories! BECAUSE I NEED TO READ THEM!!!
That was extremely sensual and I loved every word. Actually I feel like starting over and reading it all again. *fingers crossed* I hope you update soon because this story is something special.
That was extremely sensual and I loved every word. Actually I feel like starting over and reading it all again. *fingers crossed* I hope you update soon because this story is something special.
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June 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Darn...nothing else. Do you by any chance still have your other stories up and floating around somewhere?
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June 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just love this story so far. It's rather yummy and sweet. Your style of writing pretty much made me feel the longing both Sasuke and NAruto have for each other. This was lovely, so please update soon.
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June 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing!!! Best I have read in a long while!!! I can't wait to see what happens next!!! (i am especially hoping for a steamy scene to make me go like this >///< hahaha)