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June 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You obviously follow the last two episodes.. interesting continuation.
Honestly, I doubt Kakashi would EVER leave a wounded or weak Naruto alone with a not-killed enemy, namely Sasuke nearby, Sakura or not.. he'd rather have carried both of them. And Sasuke was armed..
"The manic near hysterical energy".. Naruto really knows how to get Sasuke with his endless i-understand-you & i-want-to-save-you-from-darkness speeches :( But this hysterical Sasuke was magnificent :))) I liked how Sasuke quickly & efficicently shut Naruto up. Not sure taking Naruto with him as a war trophy is a good idea 'cause he's so damn talkative and troublesome but as a trick to confuse and shock his enemies, maybe it's not a bad tactic. After all, Kakashi and Sakura heard as Madara promised Sasuke Naruto was "his" to capture..
But it seems Sasuke did it on impulse and at a loss what to do next. The ending line shows Sasuke lacks and wants some definite logical reasons why he'd spared his ex-friend. And it can be dangerous to ask never shutting up Naruto to tell why..
Please continue. What kind of prisoner will Naruto make? No ramen and Sasuke's no fun :)
Honestly, I doubt Kakashi would EVER leave a wounded or weak Naruto alone with a not-killed enemy, namely Sasuke nearby, Sakura or not.. he'd rather have carried both of them. And Sasuke was armed..
"The manic near hysterical energy".. Naruto really knows how to get Sasuke with his endless i-understand-you & i-want-to-save-you-from-darkness speeches :( But this hysterical Sasuke was magnificent :))) I liked how Sasuke quickly & efficicently shut Naruto up. Not sure taking Naruto with him as a war trophy is a good idea 'cause he's so damn talkative and troublesome but as a trick to confuse and shock his enemies, maybe it's not a bad tactic. After all, Kakashi and Sakura heard as Madara promised Sasuke Naruto was "his" to capture..
But it seems Sasuke did it on impulse and at a loss what to do next. The ending line shows Sasuke lacks and wants some definite logical reasons why he'd spared his ex-friend. And it can be dangerous to ask never shutting up Naruto to tell why..
Please continue. What kind of prisoner will Naruto make? No ramen and Sasuke's no fun :)
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June 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm crap at reviewing, but I added your profile and this story to my bookmarks. That's gotta count for something, right?
Loved chapter 1!
Loved chapter 1!
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June 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Interesting and very descriptive. I like it. I soooo have to catch up on the anime.
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June 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
off to an epic start. Can't wait for more. naru will always be the puzzel that sasu struggles with. ^^
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June 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Its mildly confusing with a lot of mystery floating around. I'm very interested to see what all is going on here and the plot development. I hope to see more soon.
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June 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Good beginning. Doesn't give me much to go on, and neither does the summary for that matter. Never-the-less, it's very well written so you get sucked in anyway. I'm looking forward to more. ^^