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This is a very interesting insight into Shikamaru's personality. Very well done and IC!

Fascinating, it has certainly caught my attention. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter.

Out of character for Shika but an interesting idea/read.

Please don’t continue this! Brrr… your Shikamaru gave me chills. He was truly cold blooded. The only way I could see this story continuing is with either Shika taking over and Naruto dead or Shika dead. As it stands now they can both be alive though Naruto better keep away from Shika. You did an awesome job with this. Some switching back and forth with your verb tenses (dialogue usually is written mostly present tense while everything else is usually written in past tense) but you have great control over how this story progressed. Especially with that tension when I was wondering if Shika was serious or not and realizing that yeah he was! I totally want to see you write more. Huh, maybe even more of this. You could totally make me be afraid for Naruto and hate Shikamaru. I think him as an opponent would be creepier than Orchimaru. This was really good!

Whoa...this was a true "mind-f**k". Very well written.