rate_review Reviews

Poor Iruka! People trying to kill him, a cursed clan, loneliness, and now a slimy cave full of slugs as a home... Plus, his only human companion does not seem really sympathetic to his plight. Kakashi can be so evil sometimes... Although Naruto certainly would have given a lot to be able to see his face like Iruka did. And doesn't it look like there are the beginnings of attraction between the two shinobi? Nice! :)

I really like this story so far. It's well-written and the plot is well thought out. I can't wait to see how the srtory progresses, so update soon. :]

This is wonderfully written! The character personalities are full and the plot is exciting. Great work.

Harry Potter 7 intervenes!

Poor Iruka, targeted for something he didn't even do himself! I hope they'll find and stop the culprit soon! Naruto would be so mad too, if he knew that someone was trying to kill his Iruka Sensei.
Now I look forward to seeing how Kakashi and Iruka get along, with their different characters, and how they'll get closer. :)
Great story so far, and the part with the other shinobi impersonating Kakashi and Iruka was really nice and fun (another Hyuuga stuck with Guy!). I hope they are all oaky, though. Plus, the enemy is quite intriguing, with such a powerful technique that can work from a distance...

Hey,
I like the story very much.
Poor Iruka, does he even have an idea, what his grandparents (?) may have done?
Can´t wait to read more.

I am really liking this so far! The Butcher Knife was my favorite, even if the little girl got the hit ^^;
I'm going to be looking forward to more! :D