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November 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey! First of all, I just love this story!!! I'll review after reading it till the end.
I just wanted to ask(?) you about two words you love to use.
The first is ”keen” as a verb, but in dictionary it means lament, so it isn't a happy/fitting thing, or do you use the meaning as some slang? Because then please next time in an authors note include an explanation of the meaning for me. English isn't my mother language, so I'm sorry if I'm slow in understanding.
The other is ”equilibrium”. Maybe it isn't as global, but you could try balance or poise -it's easier to grasp and understand for people like me - well, after looking it up,I understand, but maybe you like using a broader variety of words.
Thanks for writing this! As promised, I'll come back to review!
I just wanted to ask(?) you about two words you love to use.
The first is ”keen” as a verb, but in dictionary it means lament, so it isn't a happy/fitting thing, or do you use the meaning as some slang? Because then please next time in an authors note include an explanation of the meaning for me. English isn't my mother language, so I'm sorry if I'm slow in understanding.
The other is ”equilibrium”. Maybe it isn't as global, but you could try balance or poise -it's easier to grasp and understand for people like me - well, after looking it up,I understand, but maybe you like using a broader variety of words.
Thanks for writing this! As promised, I'll come back to review!
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November 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow! At last I reached the end, and can't wait to see more! I'm really curious: will Naruto heal from this lung thing? Will he age now that they parted with Kyuubi? Will we see others during the sequel? Arrrggggh!!! I shhould just find the sequel now, and start reading!
I really loved thus piece of yous! Great starting idea, smoothly flowing storyline, deep emotions, and I loved the way you included and described the art (both the painting/sketching and the music)!!!
Earlier I commented at the Hiashi/Naruto fic, and now I've read a totally satisfying scene with Minato in the bath, after the parents' death!!! So sorry again that I was so harsh with that one, and I'm really happy to see all these bedscenes both different from each other and fitting right into the plot! Each and every one of them were marvelous!
Also, I love the Naruto you created, both in his normal life, and as Minato's partner. He definitely isn't a weak or boring uke! Teasing his partner, and then throughoutly enjoying the fruit of his work, but caring for his partner when needed. Minato is just as great, but the semes in your previous fics were just as good, so it didn't surprise me.
Also I hope Kakashi will have a part in the sequel as well, and makes it interesting for the lovers (”will you marry Naruto?” - made me laugh! How do you come out of a situation like this? :D )!
Thank you so much!
I really loved thus piece of yous! Great starting idea, smoothly flowing storyline, deep emotions, and I loved the way you included and described the art (both the painting/sketching and the music)!!!
Earlier I commented at the Hiashi/Naruto fic, and now I've read a totally satisfying scene with Minato in the bath, after the parents' death!!! So sorry again that I was so harsh with that one, and I'm really happy to see all these bedscenes both different from each other and fitting right into the plot! Each and every one of them were marvelous!
Also, I love the Naruto you created, both in his normal life, and as Minato's partner. He definitely isn't a weak or boring uke! Teasing his partner, and then throughoutly enjoying the fruit of his work, but caring for his partner when needed. Minato is just as great, but the semes in your previous fics were just as good, so it didn't surprise me.
Also I hope Kakashi will have a part in the sequel as well, and makes it interesting for the lovers (”will you marry Naruto?” - made me laugh! How do you come out of a situation like this? :D )!
Thank you so much!
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August 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was so fantastic!!! I totally loved this story!!!! I'm so glad Naruto survived!!!! And his emotional trauma can be overcome with Minatos love!!!! I'm happy to hear there will be a sequal!!!! I can't wait!!!! See you again!!!!
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August 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was terrible!!! I really hope they both will be ok!!!! Especially Naruto menthally!!!! Please update soon!!!
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August 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awe great!!!! Finally the battle starts!!! I can't wait for more!!!! See you again soon!!!
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August 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awe that was sweet!!!!! I really want to see that picture with Naruto sleeping with foxtails bathed in sunlight!!!! Maybe you can paint that one sometime too!!!! That would be fantastic!!!! I hope to see you soon!!!!
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August 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was great!!!! Minato is so not going to like this ^^ Oh I can't wait for the fight to come ^^ See you!!!
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July 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was great!!!!! With all the talk about dieing it was kind of depressing but the great smutt lightend it!!!! All in all a very good mix for a chappie!!!! Thanks and hope to see you soon!!!!
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July 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aw, I love how you described the reactions to the death of Minato's parents and the last seen was so cute. I can't wait to see how they will resolve the issue with Madara.
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July 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was really sad but I liked it non the less!!!! I would love to read another Mina Naru Story from your feather !!!! I really like the way you write them!!!! See you again soon!!!
P.S I was right it was Madra!!!!
P.S I was right it was Madra!!!!