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for Kuro Ran: Black Orchid

by Snowway32

person smint45
schedule June 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was so beautiful!!!! I really loved this chappie!!! I really hope Minato can keep up with Narutos past and with the fact that he is his father!!! I hope he can help Naruto cope with his sorrow!!!! they are so cute together and I'm really happy that Minatos parents are not against their relationship!!!! I love it that you update this wonderful story every day!!!! See you tomorrow!!!!
person Gaudy
schedule June 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It's nice to see their relationship progressing. I can't wait to further see Minato and Naruto's reaction to their actions. You are definitely keeping me waiting to see how this further develops.
person smint45
schedule June 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was amazing!!!! I totally love your art!!! I would Be very happy of you Gould paint that wondeful Picture!!! I can' t wait to see it!!! Naruto meeting the small Kakashi was absoloutly adorable!!!! And Gama is just as sweet as always!!!! Thanks a Lot for this chappie and see you soon!!!
person Deviouslildevil
schedule June 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love it. My first time seeing an older Naru and a younger Minato pairing but it is very interesting. I can't wait to read more. Looking forward to your next update.
person smint45
schedule June 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow that painting of Jiraya was so amazing!!!! I wish I could paint so that I could see it in real^^ And this story is fast turning out to be my favorite!!!! I'm so happy Minato beginns to remember!!!! And I totally can't wait for more!!!! Hope to see you soon!!!
person Gaudy
schedule June 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is a really interesting and different take on the couple and Naruto stories out there. I can't wait to see how you further develop the characters, relationships, and story. After reading this one I decided to read some of your other stories and while I liked them and are good, I have to say that this one has a depth that the others didn't and I am really excited to see how it plays out.

Can't wait for the updates!
person smint45
schedule June 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Again wow!!! Is Minato going to get his memory from the ninjaworld back??? With the dreams and everything??? I really hope so cause his son snd soon to be lover really needs some help!!!! I can't wait for NArutos first class!!!! I hope the next update is coming just as fast!!!! See you again soon!!!
schedule June 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very sad and poignant. Nice job so far
person smint45
schedule June 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Really Interesting idea!!! I've read a lot of Naru Mina fanfics but this is really new^^ I like it that Minato is for a change the younger one!!!! I really can't wait to see where this is going!!! See you again soon!!!