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August 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow, i love the story!! im looking forward for the next chapter!
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August 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Gaaaahh!!! I love it so far!!! I love Naruto love triangles in which Naru and Sasu end up together and Saku is left by the wayside. You are currently writing my absolute FAVORITE Naruto plot. AND IN AN AU OFFICE SETTING?! GET OUT OF MY HEAD!! lol
It'd be easy to say get rid of her. However, Sakura is the mother of the children and it's always complicated when children are involved...on the other hand, they can attest to Sakura being emotionally and physically absent so what the hell. Dump the broad, after a huge "Sakura finds out!!" and get rid of her. However, I don't think Sakura should catch Sasuke and Naruto having sex because that's been done a lot. I have a feeling that Sasuke would eventually get fed up with her bullshit and he's not the type to mince words. I would like to see him tell her off and maybe as like a bonus later, catch them in the act to cement the fact that it's over. It's not like Sakura has any political/familial power and I don't know if Sasuke's company is iffy about his being gay, but if not, I think it'd be funny to have Sasuke brazenly admit it in a board meeting around the time the divorce is final. That would be awesome!
I mean...what's stopping him now other than his obligation to his wife? I'm sure Naruto would be a good parent. All Sasuke has to do is convince him, which shouldn't be difficult. XD
PLEASE CONTINUE, I WILL PROMISE YOU A REVIEW FOR EVERY CHAPTER YOU WRITE!!
It'd be easy to say get rid of her. However, Sakura is the mother of the children and it's always complicated when children are involved...on the other hand, they can attest to Sakura being emotionally and physically absent so what the hell. Dump the broad, after a huge "Sakura finds out!!" and get rid of her. However, I don't think Sakura should catch Sasuke and Naruto having sex because that's been done a lot. I have a feeling that Sasuke would eventually get fed up with her bullshit and he's not the type to mince words. I would like to see him tell her off and maybe as like a bonus later, catch them in the act to cement the fact that it's over. It's not like Sakura has any political/familial power and I don't know if Sasuke's company is iffy about his being gay, but if not, I think it'd be funny to have Sasuke brazenly admit it in a board meeting around the time the divorce is final. That would be awesome!
I mean...what's stopping him now other than his obligation to his wife? I'm sure Naruto would be a good parent. All Sasuke has to do is convince him, which shouldn't be difficult. XD
PLEASE CONTINUE, I WILL PROMISE YOU A REVIEW FOR EVERY CHAPTER YOU WRITE!!
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August 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
abandoning your kids so soon theyre no where near the greatest parents but at least sasuke spends time with thm when hes home, at least he tries cant say the same for sakura though seems she may be having an affair of her own.well at least narutos trying to do the best thing since sasuke has a family naruto really is a great guy to do such a thing.well hope sasuke comes up with a way to get rid of sakura once and for all...while still keeping his kids naruto would be a much better parent anyways.cant wait to see whatll happen next
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August 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke's kids are really cute. It's so sad the way Sakura treats them. Even though Sasuke hates being apart from Naruto (and Naruto hates being apart from Sasuke), in a way, Naruto made the right call in trying to avoid Sasuke since it gets him home in time to actually parent his children (since Sakura appears to have no interesting in doing so).
On Naruto's end: yup, he's being a coward, but I have to hand it to him for at least trying. On Sasuke's end: he's being a coward too, but I have to hand it to him for putting in the effort to get Naruto back. Naruto or no Naruto, Sasuke has plenty of reasons not to be married to Sakura--he hates his wife and is fully aware of the fact that their marriage was a mistake, and yet the obvious thing of getting a divorce doesn't even cross his mind. It's as if he doesn't see divorce as even a possible option for him. Just how trapped in the marriage is he? I know in the beginning of the fic it said that Sasuke was trying to be the good son to make up for Itachi walking away from the family, but would the Uchihas really want him stuck in a marriage like this one? I think if what Sasuke does for Naruto is to give him confidence and comfort on an emotional level, then what Naruto has to do for Sasuke in return is to give him the confidence to stand up to Sakura and his family. As far as getting rid of Sakura and officially being with Naruto, surely there must be a compromise Naruto, Sasuke, and his family could all live with? But of course, in order to have Sasuke, Naruto first has to overcome the problem of believing he can't have him. Is Sasuke's marriage the only problem for Naruto, or is there something else besides? (If Sasuke wasn't married, would Naruto have gone after him, or would he have been intimidated by Sasuke's greater wealth and social standing?) If it's just (or even mostly) the fact that Sasuke is married, I wonder how Naruto would react if he knew how miserable Sasuke was at home...? With how selfless Naruto is and how much he cares about Sasuke, I don't think he would like the idea that Sakura is using Sasuke.
Can't wait to see what happens next. :)
On Naruto's end: yup, he's being a coward, but I have to hand it to him for at least trying. On Sasuke's end: he's being a coward too, but I have to hand it to him for putting in the effort to get Naruto back. Naruto or no Naruto, Sasuke has plenty of reasons not to be married to Sakura--he hates his wife and is fully aware of the fact that their marriage was a mistake, and yet the obvious thing of getting a divorce doesn't even cross his mind. It's as if he doesn't see divorce as even a possible option for him. Just how trapped in the marriage is he? I know in the beginning of the fic it said that Sasuke was trying to be the good son to make up for Itachi walking away from the family, but would the Uchihas really want him stuck in a marriage like this one? I think if what Sasuke does for Naruto is to give him confidence and comfort on an emotional level, then what Naruto has to do for Sasuke in return is to give him the confidence to stand up to Sakura and his family. As far as getting rid of Sakura and officially being with Naruto, surely there must be a compromise Naruto, Sasuke, and his family could all live with? But of course, in order to have Sasuke, Naruto first has to overcome the problem of believing he can't have him. Is Sasuke's marriage the only problem for Naruto, or is there something else besides? (If Sasuke wasn't married, would Naruto have gone after him, or would he have been intimidated by Sasuke's greater wealth and social standing?) If it's just (or even mostly) the fact that Sasuke is married, I wonder how Naruto would react if he knew how miserable Sasuke was at home...? With how selfless Naruto is and how much he cares about Sasuke, I don't think he would like the idea that Sakura is using Sasuke.
Can't wait to see what happens next. :)
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July 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Naruto is trying so hard to do the right thing here and its just killing him. Sasuke isnt really trying to do the right thing at all but he is in love. He saw that naruto avoiding him started after Sakura visited him at work so if he can put that together he has to know that Naruto doesnt like viewing himself as the one thats breaking up a marriage. The right thing here would be for Sasuke to actually file for divorce. He doesnt want to be married to Sakura anyway. Sakura doesnt even really want Sasuke, she wants what Sasuke represents. Trying to get naruto back would require that he actually do the right thing.
Hmmm......wonder what sakura is up to when she isnt at home. She was so blatant about sasuke being there but now that he is she isnt even at home herself
Hmmm......wonder what sakura is up to when she isnt at home. She was so blatant about sasuke being there but now that he is she isnt even at home herself
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July 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was hot. Naruto wanting Sasuke, and using the gift (I'm glad you took my idea) Now I'm going to harass you everyday until you write more.
Sakura is a terrible mother, you've made me dislike this representation of her greatly, good job. Putting her wants and desires above that of her kids. She makes me sick. Sasuke is the perfect daddy though, love him in his role, hope he dumps her ass in the poor house. please tell me sakura signed a prenup so she gets nothing. Good on Naruto for taking a stand, a very cowardly stand, but a stand none the less.
Your writing is getting better and better, I'm impressed. Well, I've rambled long enough, write more, or else... :p
Sakura is a terrible mother, you've made me dislike this representation of her greatly, good job. Putting her wants and desires above that of her kids. She makes me sick. Sasuke is the perfect daddy though, love him in his role, hope he dumps her ass in the poor house. please tell me sakura signed a prenup so she gets nothing. Good on Naruto for taking a stand, a very cowardly stand, but a stand none the less.
Your writing is getting better and better, I'm impressed. Well, I've rambled long enough, write more, or else... :p
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July 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love your story can't wait for you to continue.
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July 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
errg. the sooner Sas ditches the cow, the sooner he can have his Naru pet... though maybe he should find another chicka who knows the deal and won't meddle as long as she gets moneys... which kinda goes compeletely against Sas wish for a proper family. Still, I think Naru deserves to be more than stress relief.
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July 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I hope that you write more soon!
Anyway, I like the tension but I hope that Sasuke kicks Sakura out, cuts of her money, and brings Naruto in as the new mommy!
Cant wait for more!
Anyway, I like the tension but I hope that Sasuke kicks Sakura out, cuts of her money, and brings Naruto in as the new mommy!
Cant wait for more!
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July 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story is great, I wonder what naruto will do, will he end his relationship with sasuke? or will sasuke finally realize that he loves naruto and wants to be with and end it with sakura? only time will tell lol I cant wait for the next chapter :)