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for What are you doing?

by AngelTalion

person Althydia
schedule June 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Haha! Sweet. I always wondered that about Sasuke wearing white too. :)
By the way, is this a oneshot? (looks like it)
schedule June 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You're so funny! I acted just like Naruto when I got a set myself though... Heaven!
schedule June 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
"What sort of fucking ninja wears white anyway?" I loved that. It was so true and funny. Sasuke must rack up a lot of laundry hours getting blood out of his white shirts. Either that he just buys new clothes after every mission. He's rich (he's an Uchiha after all) so he probably just buys new clothes. I wish there were more, but I'm satisfied as is. Great story.
person FromAfar
schedule June 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It's really nice, the way you've connected some real life event and fiction. Is this a vignette or you plan on continuing with some other homelife scenes? Naruto washing-drying-saving up money doing shopping?..a lil home economy :)
I think Naruto's a bit OOC here 'cause it's common place that Sasuke is a neat freak, thrifty etc. Why not to break these boring stereotypes? I also think that Naruto here clearly represents a woman :))
Let's see what's next. Good luck and some more good purchases :)