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I UTTERLY HATE WHEN NARUTO IS THE UKE, but for your fanfic I made a exception, and I'm glad I did, I really liked it, 11/10, keep it up, but try to make one where Naruto is the seme

wow...that was really hot...by far the best yaoi group fanfic i've ever read...nice work

Lotta dirty talk that kept distracting me. Even if they did research, the kids sounded like seasoned hookers saying things to just get him off. I guess it makes sense, depending on how they researched it. I recommend more details from the Omniscient POV. Um, how is Itachi fucking Naaruto and Naruto is wearching pants, but Itachi took off his shorts when they started? Sasuke was wearing underwear (i assumed they were panties) then he was wearing briefs. Itachi was so OC i couldn't read it in his voice. Still, though, I LIKED IT! i was confused bt it had great plot and the outfits were really sexy.

mwhahahah. beware the little boy sluts with a plan. Damn, they must be good at sneaking about to get into the sexy times without anyone catching them.
And they've had designs on Itachi. woah, super ambitious. I'm assuming Sas and Naru have only used toys and each other... they wouldn't want to offer Itachi sullied goods... but that's just my opinion. :D
Still, hot very hot.

The title is fine, in fact I like it and the shouta wasn't bad. I'm normally against it but the age range was good and Itachi isn't a legal adult.
You double posted the story in a single chapter so that needs to be fixed but awesome sauce is all over this! 5 stars!

I loved this so much. The smut was deliciously written, and I'm a secret shouta lover. <3 I hope to see more shouta from you in the future.

How naughty
Poor tachi didnt even stand a chance hahahahaha like he said if u can't beat them join em