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July 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this paring is rare for me to read but i am looking forward for the next chapter!
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June 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like this story so far. I feel so bad that Naruto is going to be so sad though. I can't wait for more since I have never read a Jiraiya/Naruto before. Update soon!~
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June 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is a rare pairing to find here, and you've given it a good start so far. I'd suggest a beta to help you tweak the errors. Plot wise, you've started something that I think I'll be following!
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June 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2 was fantastic! I like the way that Jiraiya confronted Kakashi. I felt pretty bad for Kaka-sensei. The way you are potraying things through Jiraiya's eyes is rather interesting. I can't wait to see how their bond grows in this story. :] Update soon~