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I love this story so much! Please please please please please write a sequel for it! I need to know what Neji will do! Pleassssssseeeee! I will get on my knees and beg if I have to!

Damn, I want more of this too.... I want divine retribution for Itachi, being ignored, and Neji totally uninterested in him, just like the last scene, and I want him to hurt, to long for him, to not be able to do his work anymore, to almost break, before trying to get Neji back, (after all Uchihas just have too much pride) and I want him to work for Neji, hard and long, but I want them to be together in the end, and seeing Sasuke's bitter face at just what he had done (after the Hyuuga showed him how good he is at business too)! I know it's cruel, but I love Neji, and don't think Itachi would be bad like this, I kinda like him, but I just bear too much grudge at the moment. After some torturing, I'll love him too, love them together.

Thanks! (Because I don't write fanfics, but I'd really loved this to happen, I hope you'll write more to this story - damn, I hope I can give you some inspiration, or at least the feeling of love so you'll write!)

This fic is great!!
I love the pairing, ItaNeji hotness is a great treat!
Itachi's character was very interesting, he really knows the power of his looks and isn't afraid to take advantage of it. Well, Itachi IS irresistable. I also liked it that Neji didn't fall onto his knees right away, he is a Hyuuga after all, and he has his pride. When he did fall on his knees though, it was HAWT! haha.
It is very hot, but at the same time I felt bad for Neji. And even though they weren't romantically involved, I still felt like he was betrayed.
Though there were signs of remorse from Itachi as well, haha.
Nobody plays the Neji Hyuuga like that without consequences!

Can't wait to read the side-fic. :D

You already know that I approve of this ending. Been there since you started writing it. Now let's see if I can get my, much shorter, part out and make reviewers either hate me. *waggles eyebrows*

Nothing but love for you dear.

Fin? Fin?

NOOO!

I want to know what happens next. I need to know what happens next.

*sniffles* Please don't end it here. Please?

Sensational ending! Don't even think of ruining it by writing a sequel. I love the fact that all three characters look bad at the end of the fic--Sasuke for hiring Itachi in the first place and then twisting the knife by letting Neji find out about it, Itachi for disregarding his conscience and his heart (as usual), and Neji for falling for Itachi's act and allowing himself to be completely distracted from work. It's enough to know that Sasuke just created a monster of a rival and that Itachi probably lost one of his only shots at happiness. (Itachi was such a cold, awful person who's ruined who knows how many other lives. Was really glad Itachi didn't get a happy ending with Neji since he totally doesn't deserve that.) Great fic!

Fin?!?! Oh, no you don't! I was really getting into this and you END IT?! No, no, no, no. You see, the way this works is you show us the sex in the public restroom and you give us more of the office sex and then after Sasuke's done being an idiot in the restruant, you show Neji getting revenge, hostle takeover, luring away empolyees. Then Sasuke starts bitching to his brother who then goes to try and calm Neji down and they end up fucking some more. And you got to let Itachi tease out what's behind Neji's little eye-shutting-tell! See, that's how this is done. I love this version of Itachi (and Neji too), you much make it longer!!!!!! *end freak out*

uh...actually I'm kinda stunned. My jaw is actually hanging open. I so did not see that coming. I thought this was going to be a longer story with... with... well you know... Itachi falling in love... stopping being a bastard... wow.

what do you mean "fin"?! i wanna know what happens next. sequel? please? pretty please with sugar on top? i am willing to bribe you for one.

Well, then. I'd like to see Neji turn things around and screw the both of them over. Or at least Sasuke. The battle lost but not the war, ne? Anyway, this was highly enjoyable. Hope you update sooner rather than later!