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Totally loving it! Keep it up!

I can't... I just can't....
I love them!!! And it's just so cute how Neji is behaving near Naru, and Naru's so sweet to Neji, and both of them starting to like the other and AAAHHHHH!!!!!
And poor Shika didn't really make any progress... One step forward (knowing how he feels for Neji) and two steps back (mulling over Naru and what to do with this whole thing) - poor thing! I wonder how he'll react meeting one or both of the others...
On the other hand, Naru and Neji are awfully fast to become interested in each other, and I'm curious as to how long their similar internal conflict will last and how they'll (or Shikamaru) solve it.
And for that matter I can't wait to see how far they'll progress before meeting Shikamaru again! :D (And if the three meet at the same time, how they'll act and feel and all...)
Ugh... now I'm filled with cenarios and plot-shards and can't wait to see what you hide in your top hat o' great magician!

You managed to stir up a load of shit didn't you?

It was amazing!!! I loved it, and just a little bit stunned at the moment. Nontheless I can't wait for the continuation! The more I read of this trio, the more I want them together, and the more I want to read stories in which they end up together! - BTW I love how different they are from TCBF! I just love both so much!!!

You have to push this story a bit in the near future! You can't leave poor Naru suffering, Shika the stressed and Neji this broken!!! And me this stomped to the floor - especially after that last sentence! I thought I was going to die!!! *feeling all the boys' emotions*

But I have to admit, I was looking for something to happen between Neji and Naru, and you more than sated my craving!

Thanks for writing this gripping crazyness!

Amazing. I love your stories. And I love this pairing/pairing. Naru/Neji just isn't complete without some Shika in it.

I'm hurting!!! What comes after this? I hope Naruto won't suffer too long! But I don't have a problem with him and Neji battling.... I wonder if after this Naruto will loose the flirting, and if so, how Shikamaru will feel/react... I love the story, and looking forward for more!

Thanks!

I really like this. It is an interesting story and the characters each come off as pretty strong personalities. Looking forward to more.

This is awesome, I can see where this is going though I think both Naruto and Neji will be hurt along the way. I love that Neji's a mangaka, that's a first for me. And Naruto is a beach bum- which I can actually see for him! Shika will be a very lucky guy when he realizes he's not as straight as he thought. I'm really looking forward to the rest of this.

I like when Shika is the object of lust for someone in a fic. I was trying to guess who the author is but still don't have a clue. I also like that Naruto is trying to pull him to his side and be his man. Naruto as a beach bum is sexy as hell too with the added benefit of being a massuse.*swoons* I'm rushing to read the next chapter.

I like it so far. The building of the relationships flows nicely, however the change in scenes/rooms or positions they are in is slightly confusing at times, but other than that it is a great fic! Keep up the wonderful work and I'm looking forward to the next installment :)