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by djserani

schedule August 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was very nice. I liked the ending and that Shika beat Kakashi to the punch. I had a feeling that Kakashi was the one Shikamaru was talking about in the conversation with Genma.
person cynaga
schedule August 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
[ch 4] Beautiful! But why "the end"... sounds like the beginning of a new KakaxShika and GenXTetsu, I hope... :D

Thanks for all your hard work, Serani-sama!
person smint45
schedule August 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awe the ending was so sweet!!!! I really liked it!!!!! And the smutty threesome was absoloutly fantastic!!!!! I totaly loved it!!!!! It was a amazing!!!! But a kind of sequal with the relationship of Kashi and Shika would be really nice!!! Well anyway thanks for this great story!!!!
schedule July 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ohhh they all have similar feelings of blaming themselves!!! All the 'what ifs' in the world won't make you feel any better and letting it go is so hard. They really do need each other. And Kotetsu *sigh* I can't help it. I'm glad he's Genma's crush lol.
person cynaga
schedule July 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
[ch. 3] My hearts aches for Kakashi in this chapter.
person smint45
schedule July 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Really fascinaring!!! Now we know of all the regrets of their past!!!! Now they only need the healing in the present!!!! Thanks a lot and see you!!!
schedule July 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ohhhhhh... Kakashi!!! Now I want them to help Kakashi. I've read a lot of stories with Kakashi and I've always gone back to the feeling that he's one who would feel a lot of guilt for what he perceives as his failures even though others might not see him that way so I think you totally portrayed Kakashi the way that I've always thought of him. I really like how this is going.
person cynaga
schedule July 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow! since Obito...
person smint45
schedule July 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story this far!!!! It's really dark but I like that too!!! Poor Kakashi hope he will be alright!!! See you again soon!!!
person Carousel
schedule July 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I loved chaoter 2. The ending was so sad though. Poor Kakashi D: The smut between Genma and Shika was yummy though.