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person roro237
schedule November 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
No I didn't realize that was Shiro narration. Pinky tried to kill her one and only love?! I'm so glad to know Naruto had rubbed off on Sasuke and he did try to save her. If Sasuke doesn't wake up soon Naruto and I might have to kill Pinky again:) I made fun of her and I don't like her very much but I still feel a little sorry for her. She lost her way because of love. Ok I'm going on to Part Four ^_^
schedule November 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i cant believe you would leave it there.
how dare you!
well.
i cant wait for the next one.
lol.
make this one just as good.

~Golden Kitsune~
schedule October 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ooooohhhhhh.... I love this story!!! I want more more more more more!!!!! Sasuke has to wake up... there has to be a happy ending. Buried with sakura? Did she have a kid survive too?!?
schedule October 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh noooo!!! this is going to be so hard on Naruto!!!!!!!!!!!!!

But I'm glad Sasuke got rid of Sakura. But how could she have caused to much damage to him? Isn't he way stronger!?
schedule October 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
you know... I like... save this story. If there are a lot of updates I usually keep passing on this update because I want to save it for last. *sigh* I just love reading it. And I agree with Gaara... I don't care what Shiro has done... I still want him together with Gaara. Of course Sasuke is in for it when Naruto finds out about the planned 'kidnapping' of the kids. whhooo boy Sasuke better run fast lol.
schedule October 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!! Sasuke can't die!!! Or Gaara! 2 might die instead of one? NEITHER!!!! arrrrgggg!!!!
schedule October 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was just a teaser chapter! I swear I ate that up in five minutes. *pouts* I want more.
person roro237
schedule October 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
WoW! Gaara is in love. It touched my heart:) That's unconditional love ^_^
schedule October 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wha... he what... more soon please!!!
person roro237
schedule October 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! You started out with a BANG!!! I loved it! That was pretty intense.. I'm still breathing hard:) I can't wait to see what you have in mind for part two ^_^