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person roro237
schedule October 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That was great!! The boys getting battle ready has me hyped:)
schedule October 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OOOHhhh Sasuke is soooo leaving to take care of Sakura... in a more permanent way! Go Sasuke!
person roro237
schedule October 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! I'm with Sasuke on this one. I know Naruto has to save his friends that's who he is. But is there anything left to save of Ms.Pink?! I'm looking forward to what's ahead ^_^
schedule October 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
omg.
this story just got way better.
i cant wait for more.
so update soon.
lol

~Golden Kitsune~
schedule October 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
aaacckkk!!!!!!!!! Gaara can still change!!! that is such a cool twist! Sakura soooo needs taken out.
schedule October 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ohhhh that was just awesome! I loved how Kankuro knew that Akane was going to attack... because he looked like it was goodbye. That is just so sweet that he knows his expressions and that Akane had that look.
person roro237
schedule October 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That's the sweets thing the Brute has ever said:) Gaara is scary when he's in Kazekage mode! I'm whispering this Naruto training everyone?! I don't want him to know I was hasting a little about that idea:) My hasting is over and yes let Naruto do it! He'll be patient with them all and he wont let any of them give up ^_^
person roro237
schedule October 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad Kankuro got there in time to stop Akane! But of course his comment was pure Kankuro:) Thank goodness Naruto hit him. I liked Sasuke being the understanding one. No one could get it like he does. ^_^
schedule October 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this is so good!!!! I was behind 5 chapters so I got to read lots! and I so didn't see it coming that Akane would attack and try to get Shiro... or that Shiro would turn out to be his brother! But I still haven't figured out how Kankuro knew Akane was after Shiro. Sure he recognized the picture and picked up something from how he looked from when he said it was his brother... but dense Kakuro being perceptive?!? lol
person roro237
schedule October 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You are amazing!!!! That was some twist:) I loved it!!! Both chapter:) Gaara was adorable drunk looking at pictures and thinking of Shiro. Then can the shocker! Akane is the little brother?! WoW wOw wOw! Didn't see that coming or the Vanguards surrounding the farm. The boys on the floor playing pee pie was to cute:)