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September 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
awww... I liked this. Sasuke has Naruto now and he's crying too isn't he. Of course my first thought was... I.am.going.to strangle.the.author... because it looked (and is) sooo short!!! But you actually had a lot of emotion and progress in the story with a minimum of words. Really good skills there ya know.
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September 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story, there has been a lot of abuse stories around, but the way you write this one makes it very different.
It's probably why I'm captivated by it. I do hope another update is close by. Author to author, I know knowing you actually have readers who like your work is much more motivation to write more than when you're not sure.
Waiting for your next chapter! :)
It's probably why I'm captivated by it. I do hope another update is close by. Author to author, I know knowing you actually have readers who like your work is much more motivation to write more than when you're not sure.
Waiting for your next chapter! :)
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August 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aww, I'm so glad Sasuke realizes how bad he's treated Naruto. I thought this was about cheating but it's really about their relationship's difficulty n how they come back together right?:). This is ending up so wonderfully. If Sasuke knew where to start, he'd have been out to find Naruto already.
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August 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
heeerree author author author... heeeerrreeee author author author... GOT Ya! Ok... now you sit here at this keyboard and type like a goooooooddddd little writer. That's good... I'll bring your milk and cookies... and a straw so you don't have to stop typing. Just lean over and sip. Poor Sasuke and Naruto's story must go on yep yep yep.
lol I like this story a lot. write lots more! :)
lol I like this story a lot. write lots more! :)
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August 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
well I hope they find each other, and I hope Sasuke changes like he says he's going to.
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August 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
THIS IS ALL BEAUTIFUL AND FRUSTRATING!!!!!!!!
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August 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
awwww... I loved that. I want more!!!!
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August 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I actually like more development on the story as to how naru and sasuke develop and what happens when sasuke finally realizes!!! THanks!
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August 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, now I feel so bad for Sasuke. He walked home thinking happy thoughts of his husband and now he's gone. I can't wait to read what Sasuke thinks of all this. I'm not so worried about reading lemons, just love w good story.:3
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August 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke seems to be worried, and Naruto looks as if his heart is breaking. This is getting good. Hope more is to come soon.