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August 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The way the summary was phrased, it sounded like Naruto has a secret, but isn't Sasuke the one with the secrets? Sasuke is a violent alcoholic who is cheating on his lover with Naruto. Or maybe I read it wrong and Neji is Naruto's lover. That would be pretty shocking, if Naruto cheats on his lover and refuses to tell Sasuke about his abusive behavior, all so he can have Sasuke as a lover in any way he can get him. (But in either case, why would Naruto keep quiet about Sasuke's violent tendencies? If sober Sasuke cares about Naruto, which it seems like he does, then he'd want to stop hurting him.) LOL. I'm confusing myself now. I'm sure there's a reason for everything. Update soon!
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August 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
for your first its amazingly well done. It left a knot in my stomach and I wanted to STOP reading but I just couldn't. VERY well done I hope to read more very soon!!