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for Sins of the Brother

by AngelTalion

person Sam
schedule March 3, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2???
schedule September 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I feel so bad for Sasu-chaaaaan. Why won't he just let Naruto help him?! ;o; MORE PLEASE!!
schedule August 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This sounds like another great one Tali. I feel do bad for poor Sasuke n it's so hard for me to see Itachi in a bad light. Can't wait for more.:3
person G
schedule August 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh how horrible. Naruto has to find a way to help Sasuke. (I wonder if Naruto knows just how bad it really is...) Sasuke can't help himself since he's been manipulated by Itachi into thinking foster care is worse than what Itachi does to him. (Can anything be worse than that?) Even if Sasuke doesn't want him to, Naruto should tell an adult. I'm dreading what happened in that bedroom at the end. I don't want it to be sexual abuse on top of all the physical abuse Sasuke is already enduring, but if Naruto was Sasuke's first "willing" kiss, well... :(
person Carousel
schedule August 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like this a lot so far. I feel so bad for Sasuke though. Itachi seems like such a meanie. D: Update soon! I hope Naruto will eventually save the day.
schedule August 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is good. I like this. It really sounds like you've a strong story here. Keep them coming.