rate_review Reviews

You should totally continue this story! I read it and now I want to know what happened! Please continue it :D

I hope you will continue with this story. You've got me sucked in. I want to know what happened.

You must continue! This is genius! I really want to know about the cat and who was in Naruto's bed. It's Sasuke, right? say yes. <3

Oh WOW!!! I can't wait to see who's in Naruto's bed!!! Hopefully Sasuke rescued Naruto from making too big an ass of himself n got him a kitten for having to miss their time together.:3. Love this story already n wants to try some of Kiba's famous Choc. Chip Pancakes,lol. Love it!!

It's not bad, but it's not grabbing me either. I liked the idea behind the story more than what I read. I think there was too much information on Naruto's friends, how they knew him, who has a crush on who, etc., etc. (Felt like it took up 80% of the chapter.) To be honest, I don't care about any of that stuff. I pick up a story like this one because I assume I'm gonna see Naruto do stupid shit and end the night with hot sex. That's it. If you start getting into it with all the side characters, with so-and-so going after so-and-so... Meh. You might as well be writing a serious chapter fic and not drunken Naruto crack. (Naruto's eyes glistening with tears after not seeing Sasuke for a month was also a little much. He's a grownup. He can deal.) My point is, you write better than this. You can do some seriously good drama and romance and comedy and this story isn't up to your usual quality. I'm not going to read on, but if you do choose to continue with the fic, then I wish you luck with it.

Trying to strip while dancing on a table (or during druken karaoke) is always a funny staple of happy drunk people and his friends either trying to talk him out of it (Shikamaru and Choji) would be trying to be heard over the friends that were catcalling and egging him on (Sakura, Ino, and Kiba- especially Kiba). I am pretty sure Sai would have already started sketches to commemorate the occasion. Sasuke could come in toward the end where they finally got him down (of the stage or table) and he was being restrained (or groped) by Sai. At which point Naruto would be clinging mostly naked to Sasuke while bitching about what a dick Itachi is and how he could not believe that he got ditched for some lame business party. And about how glad he was that he showed up and that he missed him, and your hair is funny, and you smell nice...etc You know - random drunken ramblings when alcohol takes away your ability to filter what you think before you speak..... Please tell me someone caught footage of at least some of it on their cell for blackmail purposes (Ino and Sakura)

that is a definite yes!! i wanna know who was in bed with naruto and how he got that kitten!! -puppy dog eyes- please???? pretty please with a cherry on top??? or a naruto on top?

I screamed because it ended there! *pulls hair out* you MUST continue this. Who's in Naruto's bed? I bet when Naru-chan went crazy he danced on the table, somehow fled the pub, crashed the business party, kidnapped Sasuke in the end and some other random things got thrown in like the kitten, a new tattoo, love confessions, showing off stripper dance moves and various stuff...

I hope to see the end of this soon. Lmao

Hell yeah you should continue!!!!!! I NEED to know what happens next!!!

Ohhh..very nice!!! I love it so far.