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December 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is an amazing story and I can't wait to see what happens next! Please, Please, Please update soon!!!!!
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September 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
You must finish this story! It's soo good and I really like the concept and where the story line seems to be heading. I would really appreciate it f you could find some time or creativity to complete it. Please and thank you
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July 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm really liking this story so far. I want to see Itachi and Naruto be bros and fight against Sasuke
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December 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
plz write more
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November 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, I liked that very much and I really missed seeing this story but I'm so glad ur back to finish. This was definitely funny reading Minato acting just like Naruto then throwing in those sexy ass Hyuga twins.(Love them)
As well the others we read were there.
As well the others we read were there.
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November 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
plz write more
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November 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Good update. Funny how Naruto doesnt wanna know about his dad and sex. Funny stuff. Update again soon please.
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November 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
good good good good GOOD! I can't wait till Sasuke finds out... he's soooo going to be kicking himself
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October 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like the concept of Itachi being Naruto's brother and all, please keep this story going
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September 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is a very interesting idea and you have a very nice writing style. The only thing is it's progressing too quickly. I really like this story but I think you need to rewrite it so it's a little longer. Too many surprises at once isn't a good thing. Let the reader get used to one idea at a time. Give them a little extra angst, information, sex to chew on before you throw another curveball at them. I really like how the story is going but don't rush it.