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by nekluvshp

person Anon
schedule September 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hi, it's me again, Anon(loll)
Hurry, hurry! You're making me anxious!!!
person Sasuma
schedule August 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Im hooked really... Lovin it so far
person prettypurpletiger
schedule August 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The story is shaping up really great its just that the chapters are so short that you arent getting the actual story out. As soon as you learn something its the end of the chapter.
schedule August 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ohhhhhh... I want more!!!!!!!!! Did someone really die? Was Minato raped? arrggg!!! I forgot... he doesn't know!!!!!!!!! More more more pretty please!!!!!!!!
person richon
schedule August 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hoho naru and itachi are brothers !! what happen when naru and sasu left together ??how th uchiha found them!! i have a lot of questions, looking for the anwers !!
schedule August 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*Stares down at empty fanfiction bowl and sighs* I want more! I want more! I want more! I want more! I want more! I want more! I want more! I want more! I want more! I want more! I want more! *chants and bangs spoon and fork on the desk*
schedule August 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Heavy. I wonder how they ended up together. But I guess we will see. I am reviewing just like I said I was after I got out of skewl. I really like this the drama and the suspence is killing me. But not literally. LOL but it might. LOL

well best wishes
MD
person Rissa
schedule August 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Once again, a wonderful chapter! :) I can't wait for the next one! I hate having to wait, but it's always worth it! Keep up the good work!
schedule August 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that I saw that one coming although I did have a slight thought about Sai randomly showing up in the picture and he would be our mystery sibling. I can't wait for more and to see if Naruto would revel to Fugaku and Itachi that he's pregnant with Sasuke's baby...?
person Althydia
schedule August 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter. I didn't expect Itachi to be the half brother, but I wonder what will happen now. Will Naruto tell Fugaku his secret too? When will Sasuke know the truth? Is Sasuke missing Naruto? Sasuke's sons are very cute, but I'm not a big fan of SasuSaku. Although this chapter seemed to hint at some problems in the couple... Also, will there be a happy ending for Naruto and Sasuke?