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such a bastard. He so does NOT deserve Naru. I hope u have someone better out there for him.

hoho this chapter is awesome, the plot is great, i am looking forward the next chapter !!

Dang it!! Naruto should've given him the book Tsunade gave him!! I hope Sasuke's not married to Sakura. I hate that she may have had kids with him, lol.

You have me hooked and looking forward to more.

Great... Sasuke doesn't even believe Naruto.

Oh this is going to be good. I read the 1st chapter 2x already. Nice idea.

OMG this is incredibly sad, WHY SASUKE? are you such a bastard, all I have to say is Sasuke better make up for it, Cuz i want SasuNaru to happen, Obviously lol, great start on the beginning, I cant wait for more :)

*looking under keyboard... scrolling mouse up and down*

ok... I KNOooooow you have more of this story somewhere... now *foot tapping impatiently* where is it? NOT EVEN TYPED YET?!? STILL IN YOUR HEAD?!?

ok... out with it... right here... come on... *waiting patiently... sorta*

I like it :)

It was very short so you cant really get a good feel about what is going on but I have to wonder why in the world Naruto would be with Sasuke if Sasuke is married with children and obviously not in love with him. That was the impression that I got, that Sasuke isnt in love with him, he is just using him for sex. He is married to someone that isnt Naruto, that naruto doesnt even like and played pranks on. Naruto tells him that he is pregnant, which isnt believble so I understand why sasuke would think that he is pulling another prank. Sasuke doesnt know about Narutos' genetic mutation. Already this naruto seems to be a emotional weakling that would be with a married man that didnt really care about him because he married someone else and still wanted to sleep with him. Why go through that? why put himself through that? and now look what the result is, sasuke tells him never to come near him again? He shouldnt have been messing around with him in the first place if they grew up togther and that is all sasuke thinks of him. Good enough to have sex with but not good enough to be with.

OHMYGOD...UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! I am in so much suspense with this! I loveeee it! The writing is wonderful and it almost made me tear up at the end. Amazing! Keep 'em coming! :)