rate_review Reviews

Good start, please please continue :o)

To the first part of the response in the beginning of the chapter. What stories have you read? There's hardly ANY Sasuke stories that have him all powered up. Seems like you didn't really make your case there. Now if you want to talk about stuff like that, look at all the Naruto harem and non-harem fics out there. It's full of nothing but him being powered up. Case in point, how many Naruto harem fics on this site alone have Naruto all jacked up... EVERY SINGLE ONE. How many Sasuke fics... none. You go to fanfiction or mediaminer and you'll see the same thing. Seems like all the Naruto fans use this excuse when they're questioned about their story.

Holy hell, this is fucking AWESOME!!! I love the premise and its well written. I can't wait to see more. Keep up the incredible work and please, please, PLEASE update as soon as you can!

P.S. Sorry to sound like a whiny bitch there, but this story is just that good!

Well how do I put this. On one note I am interested in how the story is progressing, although there are two things that worry me.

1. Naruto appears to be getting quite powerful and I worry this will go into god-Naruto territory. (How interesting can a story be if the strongest being can kill the next strongest with a snap of his fingers?)
2. This is similar to one, but please don't make other characters look bad just to make Naruto look better. While Naruto can be strong don't say give him every bloodline in existence (I have seen this) or give him insane intelligence. Naruto is interesting because he is imperfect.

I suppose the last thing is a request. Can you put other (male) main characters in the story (it would be a first for these types). I want to see how they can fit with this new Naruto. (And I don't mean main as constantly bashed).

twisted and evil!!good work.

Never been much of a naruto fan but this story is changing that opinion greatly please update this and your other stories too