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June 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hehe... my only problem is that this is a oneshot! Yeah... I wonder is she found out? This was very interesting!
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August 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I can see myself in Ino's place so clearly it hurts. Doubly so as the massive Jiraiya fangirl that I am.
It's just incredible how you mixed cold reality with crack so perfectly.
Beautiful, wonderful story. I hope to see more from you.
It's just incredible how you mixed cold reality with crack so perfectly.
Beautiful, wonderful story. I hope to see more from you.
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August 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Only found one error, and that in the first paragraph
Bolded it for ya.
As this is not my normal fandom, I thought I'd give it a read anyway. Gotta say I was pleasantly surprised! Good job!
though despite all that, she was ridiculously well fucked and and satisfied
Bolded it for ya.
As this is not my normal fandom, I thought I'd give it a read anyway. Gotta say I was pleasantly surprised! Good job!