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for Hallelujah

by Deandraquin

schedule August 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
it's true... this does cause tears and plenty of them. thanks so much for sharing.
schedule August 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Short, sweet, and I bawled my eyes out.
schedule August 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
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schedule August 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey, i don't know if you know this but there is another verse to the song. If you get the chance you might want to add it in. It's also a good verse that I think would fit in with your fic. The fic was short and sweet. I liked it. Thanks for sharing.