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for My Beautiful Master

by Snowway32

schedule August 21, 2018 at 12:00 AM

its sad that such a good writer as you would leave such a bountiful story and not complete it.

schedule February 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
can't do this to me D: you can't! You just can't leave it there like that!!! I'm so inlove with this story I hafe to know what happens I just hafe to D:who killed naruto’s dad? What's to become of the love they have?! Are they going to bring light back to heaven relme?! So many questions that I'm dieing to find out I see this hasn't been touched in a while it brings me great sadness that it's incomplete ;-; it should be against the rules for this master work of art isn't done I really hope you get it going once aging I hate be one of them ppl who beg but I just can't help it with this one plzzz don't let it just stop there plzzzz I need to know what's happen next. I'm dieing to know, I really am inlove for the story line you did as well as the plot I fished this in one day that's pertty fast for me, it's just one them story's I couldn't put down!!!! I hope the plot buddies find you aging *makes silly sounds* for plot bunnies to come you're way!!!
person Naomi
schedule January 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This is an amazing story and I really can't wait to see what happens next! Please update soon!!!!!
person dani
schedule June 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I hope you finish this fic. I rarely find any that I enjoy reading anymore. Most of the recent fics seem to be written by children. The grammar is horrible, the wording is wrong, and half the time they jump all over the place. But I enjoyed reading what you have written so far in My Beautiful Master. I know it's been years but you have over 10,000 hits. I think you should finish it.
schedule March 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
OMG SO ADORABLE!!!!! I spazzed so many times in this chapter. Okay now for the next one. wow. so adorable!!!
person Deathstar92
schedule March 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love the story hope u write more!! 😄❤️❤️
person Rainshi
schedule September 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
God I miss this story. I wish you would contiune, but I understand that life comes first. Could you though give us a hint if you are to contiune or not? So we don't hope for something that's not to come.
schedule August 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Are you going to finish this story? It would be nice to finally have an ending to one of your stories which I find have potential. Thanks.
schedule March 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Review review review! (Are these enough reviews to ask for an update ;)
I'm loving this! Wow it's so perfect, every part is explained so well, I like how you answer everyone's questions at the beginning too. Definitely keep going wih this, I'm curious to find out what happens next! ^_^
person Rainshi
schedule February 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I miss this story. it's been years I hope everything is okay. can you give us anything on if this story is discontiuned or not.