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July 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
When was this last updated? I really hope you havent given up on this story, since i have come to love it very dearly. I hope there will be another chapter soon.
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June 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
waaaaa I miss this tory sooooo much I wanna new chapter. But but waaaaa I wanna good chapter ooooh the inhumanity!
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April 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh how I miss this story. the pain of waiting yet the fear of begging to soon. It's to intense I don't know what to ask of you!
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March 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh god I love this story!! I love the way you write the characters, the plot you have going, and I can't wait to read more of this! <3
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January 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
(His father had been the only one he had left
there was nothing left.
How long he sat in the rain Naruto didn't know but even when he eventually heard the sound of a car
"Naru-chan?"
"Uncle Kashi?")
---so you start by writing naruto didn't have anybody left- and the next paragraph you give him an uncle- well, i guess he does have someone left, doesn't he..
-the angst was a bit over the top- probably would have been better to ease into it gently instead of presenting it as a tsunami/hurricane right at the start. can't appreciate the sadness when that's all there is to begin with- when there's nothing to compare it with.
-otherwise, i like the concept- sasuke being sent from another realm to protect and be naruto's companion- while investigating why/how minato died- but that leads to the question- if fugaku is a god like deity; and his duty is to protect minato- why doesn't he know what happened to minato- why did he fail to protect minato- i guess those questions will be answered in future chapters- so something to look forward to.
thanks for sharing
there was nothing left.
How long he sat in the rain Naruto didn't know but even when he eventually heard the sound of a car
"Naru-chan?"
"Uncle Kashi?")
---so you start by writing naruto didn't have anybody left- and the next paragraph you give him an uncle- well, i guess he does have someone left, doesn't he..
-the angst was a bit over the top- probably would have been better to ease into it gently instead of presenting it as a tsunami/hurricane right at the start. can't appreciate the sadness when that's all there is to begin with- when there's nothing to compare it with.
-otherwise, i like the concept- sasuke being sent from another realm to protect and be naruto's companion- while investigating why/how minato died- but that leads to the question- if fugaku is a god like deity; and his duty is to protect minato- why doesn't he know what happened to minato- why did he fail to protect minato- i guess those questions will be answered in future chapters- so something to look forward to.
thanks for sharing
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December 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is such an awesome story. I have never read a story with neko Sasuke. I really liked the history, but I hope that their love won't end tragically. I hope Jiriya doesn't continue to be so hard on Naruto and continue to make things harder for him. I can't wait for you to update. Great writing and I hope your muse find you fast!
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November 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
WAAA I love this story I must have more please!
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October 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thank you very much for the last two chapters! I'll have to be brief today but I really enjoyed them and I'm really interested in the new plot developments. I hope that Sasuke and Naruto's fate doesn't have to be tragic everytime they are reborn, though... And I hope Jiraiya doesn't really resent poor Naruto - it was not his fault his chakra attracted enemies since nobody taught him to control it until it was too late! I hope Sasuke will let Naruto feel all his love for him with his empathetic powers to make up for it!
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October 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh saus find naru and his other half , their sault are happy to be together again... I love this story, see you soon with more !!
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October 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awe that was so cute ^^ I totally loved this chappy!!! Although you are right Jiraja is really a bit to harsh to Naruto!!! But thank you for the great update!!! Hope to see you soon!!!!