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for My Beautiful Master

by Snowway32

person richon
schedule September 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hoho jirayia show his true self, sasu is more and more protective about naru!!this story is awesome, i am craving for the next chapter , see you soon
person Anon
schedule September 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aww, sookie sookie now. Those boys just can't seem to control themselves around one another. It's nice to see the budding romance around them, especially for Naruto, since his life just got turned upside down.

Will Naruto try to feel up his jiji-chan's ears and tails? It would be cute if he kept trying, but fail because his jiji would be just one step ahead of him to block his advances. It would be a positive bonding moment for the two of them.

If they take Naruto to the Heavenly Realm, where will he go exactly and will Jiraiya and Kakashi go as well?

Will Naruto have his own cute fox ears and tails? If so, how many tails?

Won't Sasuke have possessive/jealously issues if he gets Itachi to help with Naruto?
person rainbowunicornsarefun
schedule September 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this is sooooo nice! Please update soon! I love this story.=)
person Althydia
schedule September 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Still loving this story with every added chapter... So glad that Naruto accepted his true heritage without too many problems! Minato was doing a good job preparing him for that day with his stories, wasn't he?
Also, Naruto and Sasuke sure look cosy together! Has Sasuke still not noticed that something more than his heat could be the cause (or maybe it's an Uchiha thing to be in denial about one's mate)? And isn't it ironic that Sasuke who doesn't like sweet things tastes and smells sweet to Naruto? :)
I love their interactions when they are together and I think Sasuke is doing a good job taking care of Naruto and feeling empathy and compassion for him - as well as distracting him from his pain. But I won't object to seeing more of Itachi, of course. Although I can't expect Sasuke to leave Naruto alone with him (but I do rather expect some teasing from Itachi when he sees his little brother so flustered by the Kitsune)...
I'm glad that Naruto told Sasuke about what he saw too. But I think that Sasuke should tell his dad at least some of that if he wants to advance in his investigation of Minato's death. I do hope that Fugaku doesn't expect Sasuke to take care of the culprit by himself, though?
Also, if they leave for the Heavenly Realm, with the big time difference between the two worlds, wouldn't it cause some trouble in the Human world if they suddenly disappeared for a few years? At least, if they plan on ever coming back... And will they take Kakashi too?
So, I guess that Fugaku can cope with Minato's death, even though they were mates, because he had never claimed him? And why did Madara forbid the marriage with a very powerful Kitsune (apart from just for the joy of being a bastard)? Anyway, I think it's high time Fugaku or Itachi talked to Sasuke about mating...
Thanks for the answers and chapter - I'll look forward to the next one!
P.S. Will we see Kitsune Naruto soon? So fluffy... Sasuke won't stand a chance!
person Nimbafuu
schedule September 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Nooo! I always hate it when it ends! I want to read more, this story is so captivating!! I can't wait for more!! :D
person smint45
schedule September 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was great!!! I loved Narus kiss^^ And how overprotective Sasuke is^^ But I think that is necessary after what happend!!! I can't wait for more!!! See you soon!!!
person Stacy
schedule September 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful chapter! A white 9 tailed fox? Cool!
person richon
schedule September 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
there is some explaination in this chapter !! I want more pointer !! this story is awesome!! see you soon
person Anon
schedule September 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is still emotionally packed with Naruto reliving things, Kakashi being able to show his pain when his father arrived, but having to impart the horrible news, and Jiraiya getting hit with the news himself. If Sasuke is as sensitive as he seems, how can he handle all the pain going on in that house, especially with Naruto's pain and condition?

Real Question: Since Naruto is unconscious and probably will not be able to speak about what happened any time soon, will Sasuke be able to go into his mind and relay what happened to the others? I assume if this did happened, he would definitely wait for Naruto's permission first.
person smint45
schedule September 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awe that was so fantastic!!!!! I totally love you nine tailed Jiraja he is so cute!!!! I totally adore him ^^ And I just love Sasukes possesive side!!!! I so can't wait for more to come!!!!1 please update soon!!!! See you!!!