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September 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I haven't given you a review since the first chapter, i feel so bad :(
But anyway the story is progressing nicely and i can wait to see who the evil person is. Right now im guessing its either Itachi or another Uchiha, perhaps Madara or Orochimaru but i guess i'll find out eventually.
I did notice that there were a couple of spelling mistakes in this chapter but its nothing major so you shouldn't worry, it was just unusual to see from you.
Can't wait for the next chapter, update soon :)
But anyway the story is progressing nicely and i can wait to see who the evil person is. Right now im guessing its either Itachi or another Uchiha, perhaps Madara or Orochimaru but i guess i'll find out eventually.
I did notice that there were a couple of spelling mistakes in this chapter but its nothing major so you shouldn't worry, it was just unusual to see from you.
Can't wait for the next chapter, update soon :)
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September 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! And thank you for the answers and the gift too! (very nice drawing!)
The killer is still mysterious, but my guess at the moment would be Madara. Also, why didn't he kill Naruto when he had the occasion? And what would he gain by killing Minato? Can one absorb the Kyuubi's chakra after his death or is it just to eliminate the competition?
I also wonder about who Minato's mother was (since it wasn't Tsunade apparently) and if she could be important (I even wondered if it couldn't have been Orochimaru!). I'm glad Jiraya came back, though, because Naruto will need his guidance. Naruto will have so much to learn about his family and the Heavenly Realm and his own powers! I hope he can take everything in despite his grief - and I very much look forward to his first conscious meeting with Sasuke! I hope he can still feel the instinctive trust and attraction to him, because Sasuke would probably take complete rejection very badly...
I'm also very interested in all the other deities and what role they'll play in the story (like Gaara maybe?). I'd like to see how Naruto would fare in the Heavenly Realm too.
Also, from what Minato wrote in his diaries, could it have been possible that he and Fugaku become mates like Sasuke and Naruto if Minato hadn't met Kushina? I'm still a little surprised that he always hid his Kyuubi side from her too. What would have happened if she hadn't died when Naruto became 18 and his full powers were set free?
And Sasuke being possessive of Naruto even with Jiraya: :D It's so cute! I wonder if Jiraya can sense that they are actually mates...
Now let's hope that Sasuke will be able to make Naruto smile again. ;) (I don't want him to be suicidal anymore) And thank you for sharing!
The killer is still mysterious, but my guess at the moment would be Madara. Also, why didn't he kill Naruto when he had the occasion? And what would he gain by killing Minato? Can one absorb the Kyuubi's chakra after his death or is it just to eliminate the competition?
I also wonder about who Minato's mother was (since it wasn't Tsunade apparently) and if she could be important (I even wondered if it couldn't have been Orochimaru!). I'm glad Jiraya came back, though, because Naruto will need his guidance. Naruto will have so much to learn about his family and the Heavenly Realm and his own powers! I hope he can take everything in despite his grief - and I very much look forward to his first conscious meeting with Sasuke! I hope he can still feel the instinctive trust and attraction to him, because Sasuke would probably take complete rejection very badly...
I'm also very interested in all the other deities and what role they'll play in the story (like Gaara maybe?). I'd like to see how Naruto would fare in the Heavenly Realm too.
Also, from what Minato wrote in his diaries, could it have been possible that he and Fugaku become mates like Sasuke and Naruto if Minato hadn't met Kushina? I'm still a little surprised that he always hid his Kyuubi side from her too. What would have happened if she hadn't died when Naruto became 18 and his full powers were set free?
And Sasuke being possessive of Naruto even with Jiraya: :D It's so cute! I wonder if Jiraya can sense that they are actually mates...
Now let's hope that Sasuke will be able to make Naruto smile again. ;) (I don't want him to be suicidal anymore) And thank you for sharing!
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September 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ohoh sasu reveal himself!! naru got his memory back, what is it exactly, a kistune ? kuybi ?? to much questions!! love this story, so awesome!!
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September 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Damn! I never want it to end! I can't wait for the next update!
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September 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I'm hooked. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Naughty Kashi. Did he leave Naruto for so long for his own purposes, or was he trying to draw Sasuke out of his small concealment?
Please update soon.
Naughty Kashi. Did he leave Naruto for so long for his own purposes, or was he trying to draw Sasuke out of his small concealment?
Please update soon.
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September 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Cool chapter, although it's still hard to see poor Naruto so sad... It also seems that the Namikaze family have a lot more secrets that I thought. So Kakashi and Naruto know about the Neko deities protecting them (although I hope Naruto won't freak out when he recovers from his fever and sees Sasuke). Also, Kyuubi seems to have been inside Minato. Does it mean that it was sealed there or that Minato is a kitsune deity? Because Naruto also has whiskers marks and a seal so he could be part kitsune too... But then what about Kakashi and Jiraya? Speaking of which: I thought Jiraya was dead, but with Minato's words to Naruto I'm not so sure anymore... which begs the question: where the hell is Jiraya when Minato gets killed and Naruto is left traumatised and alone?
Also, something tells me that Fugaku knows more than he's saying, so he has indeed some explaining to do to Sasuke. And if the Kyuubi was indeed inside Minato, it could be a good motive to kill him. Maybe Madara did it, as a renegade from the Uchiha clan hungry for power (like in the manga actually)? But it could also be Orochimaru or someone else...
Another thing: has Sasuke been told about mates? I should hope so, but he just hasn't realised what his feelings for Naruto are yet (or he's in denial)... And what was Kakashi doing at Iruka's office, leaving Naruto alone? Could it be another couple? But Sasuke's anger at him was quite fun and justified (even though he's also mega possessive of Naruto). And have I told you that I think Sasuke's bell on a ribbon on his tail must look absolutely adorable? Quite a nice and softer addition to his warrior look too. I understand how Itachi must find his brother so cute. :)
Anyway, thanks for answering some of my questions! As you can see, I just have more for you, but it's just because your story is so fascinating... Now I hope that with Sasuke's help Naruto will gradually be able to get out of his traumatised state and become more like his usual self, because I'd love to see more interactions between them (and there's still the problem of Sasuke's heat to address)!
Also, something tells me that Fugaku knows more than he's saying, so he has indeed some explaining to do to Sasuke. And if the Kyuubi was indeed inside Minato, it could be a good motive to kill him. Maybe Madara did it, as a renegade from the Uchiha clan hungry for power (like in the manga actually)? But it could also be Orochimaru or someone else...
Another thing: has Sasuke been told about mates? I should hope so, but he just hasn't realised what his feelings for Naruto are yet (or he's in denial)... And what was Kakashi doing at Iruka's office, leaving Naruto alone? Could it be another couple? But Sasuke's anger at him was quite fun and justified (even though he's also mega possessive of Naruto). And have I told you that I think Sasuke's bell on a ribbon on his tail must look absolutely adorable? Quite a nice and softer addition to his warrior look too. I understand how Itachi must find his brother so cute. :)
Anyway, thanks for answering some of my questions! As you can see, I just have more for you, but it's just because your story is so fascinating... Now I hope that with Sasuke's help Naruto will gradually be able to get out of his traumatised state and become more like his usual self, because I'd love to see more interactions between them (and there's still the problem of Sasuke's heat to address)!
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September 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awe that was great!!!! So Kakashi knew and it seems naruto knew too!!! Cool!!! And Poor Naruto finally remembers what happend, although we still don't know what that means!!!! I so can't wait for more!!!! See you soon!!!!
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September 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this SO SO SO much, update soon I can't wait for more!
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September 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Poor Naruto... :'( I felt how his loved ones must have felt frustrated and powerless to help him. I hope Sasuke can help and maybe distract him from his pain (he's doing a fine job already).
This story is very interesting, and I love the idea of a neko Sasuke (Itachi must look nice too) acting as a guardian (and avenging?) angel for Naruto. I can't wait for Sasuke to reveal his true form to Naruto (maybe to protect him or because of the heat?). That will be something for sure...
I was a bit confused in this chapter as to where Naruto was staying, since it was obviously not his house and I though Kakashi lived in Tokyo. So I guess Kakashi also has a home in Konoha?
Also, will we see Naruto's friends (if he has some)? Shouldn't they want to at least visit him to see how he's coping and if he needs anything?
And will Naruto really leave Konoha? Even though the event of his father's death has obviously and understandingly traumatised him, at least in Konoha he has the Uchiha clan to look after him... Speaking of his father's death, it seems like something happened with the Kyuubi maybe (although it's still quite mysterious)? And what about Naruto's tattoo? Shouldn't Sasuke recognise it as a seal (if it is indeed one)?
Many questions, but I hope I'll get some answers in the next chapter. I'm very much looking forward to reading it!
This story is very interesting, and I love the idea of a neko Sasuke (Itachi must look nice too) acting as a guardian (and avenging?) angel for Naruto. I can't wait for Sasuke to reveal his true form to Naruto (maybe to protect him or because of the heat?). That will be something for sure...
I was a bit confused in this chapter as to where Naruto was staying, since it was obviously not his house and I though Kakashi lived in Tokyo. So I guess Kakashi also has a home in Konoha?
Also, will we see Naruto's friends (if he has some)? Shouldn't they want to at least visit him to see how he's coping and if he needs anything?
And will Naruto really leave Konoha? Even though the event of his father's death has obviously and understandingly traumatised him, at least in Konoha he has the Uchiha clan to look after him... Speaking of his father's death, it seems like something happened with the Kyuubi maybe (although it's still quite mysterious)? And what about Naruto's tattoo? Shouldn't Sasuke recognise it as a seal (if it is indeed one)?
Many questions, but I hope I'll get some answers in the next chapter. I'm very much looking forward to reading it!
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September 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hoho looking forward when sasu will reveal himself... what is exactly naru ?? love this story !! see you soon with more