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NONONONONONONO please don't end this wonderful story it is breaking my heart in two and Iruka-chan too. Anyway, I hope you post pretty a sequel about Iruka-chan and how Kakashi is going to beat the crap out of Mizuki. Pretty please!
Your story is awesome like the others good continuation.
Do you have an account in fanfiction.net?

Nice, I'm going to really like this. Cant wait for the next chapter.:d

Oh.... I want to read more but if Iruka will be pregnant with Mizuki then I'm not so sure anymore... Well, we'll see.

Thanks for writing this! I love iruka and kakashi! Can't wait for your next update!

Hi I love all your stories they are so passionating and awesome.
Please post soon.

So far I am liking this story and I hope Kakashi does something painful and lasting to Mizuki. I only have one complaint and it is a small one. The word is spelled 'raped' not 'rapped'. You spelled it correctly at the end of the story, but every time you used it up until then you used the incorrect spelling so I figured the last time might have been an accident. A good rule of thumb (there are exceptions to every rule in english however) is that when a word has a double consonant then the preceding vowel will be a short vowel. So in the case of 'rapped' it is pronounced like the word 'wrapped'. Interestingly enough- 'rapped' is an actual word. It is the past tense of both versions of the word 'rap' (the singing style and a short, sharp knock). Did not mean to start babbling on about language (just a pet peeve) and if I have overstepped my bounds please feel free to ignore me.

Once again- loving this story so far and hope you update soon!