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ooohhhh!!! I loved that!!! I loved what Sasuke said to Naruto!!! Hating Sasuke is just impossible for me but he was so horrible to Naruto. I'm so glad to know that he has left Naruto alone for all the years to pay for what he did and that all he is expecting is to try to be friends with Naruto again. That will be a major step for Naruto to be able to forgive him and accept him as a part of their lives and in his son's life. Ohhh I just so love this story! You keep surprising me!!!

and thanks for the kudos! I am totally enjoying beta reading this for you :)

omg.
i cant wait for more of this one.
i love it.
XD.
update soon.

~Golden Kitsune~

wow, you update fast. ^^
For the deadies... couldn't happen to a nicer pair of bastards. Yuu chan, really, going in with NO backup. Not smart kid, not at all. Well crap, how are they gonna get Kyu Naru to back down enough to save his kid.
No typos at ALL *happy dances allllll around you, waving banners. Though, why do we have two chappie 3's :/

Ok, I did NOT expect that. I didn't think Sasuke would go that far. Even though he was not punished for any of the things he did while being with Orochimaru, this happens in Konoha and I don't see how he could escape punishment this time if and when he gets caught. What an asshole. Unless that wasn't Sasuke, but who else could it be? =/

omg.
he did NOT!
ugh.
how could u end it there!
im so maddddd.
update soon.
ugh!

~Golden Kitsune~

Oh my, I almost feel guilty for thinking it was Sasuke...

I definitely did not expect the kidnapper to be Itachi, somehow Akatsuki had totally slipped my mind, silly me. Now then, does Itachi want an heir too? *shudders in horror* D:

omg.
i love it.
not the bad stuff.
but the ending.
nice.
cant wait for more.
update soon.
lol.

~Golden Kitsune~

Gaara attempts to head the problem off at the pass- good for him! I cannot begin to describe how disgusted I am with Sasuke so far. If he were truly forced to do it for the sake of his cover then that is one thing, but the way he was behaving during that time and how eager he was to torture Naruto and how often he did it was well beyond what would have been required to stay in Orochimaru's good graces. He had to force Naruto, but that does not mean he had to make it as painful as he possibly could. (the sick bastard was enjoying it!) And if it were truly all for the sake of the mission he would have not have acted the way he did on his return. People who are forced to do extreme things (like repeatedly raping and torturing their best friend) feel bad about it during and afterward. They do not just do the Uchiha equivalent of saying "Na na, nothing you can do I have a get out of jail free card so it sucks for you!" while sticking out their tongue.

He did not seem to care at all what Naruto had went through and gave the impression that he just used the mission as an excuse to do whatever he wanted with impunity....the bastard.

this is getting interesting.
i cant wait to see where this leads.
keep up the good work!
oh...
and are you gonna have any smut in this?
like as a flashback or something?
just wondering.
XD.

~Golden Kitsune~

Oh my, Sasuke is being his usual bastard self, really now, I don't expect him to give up so easily. I also can't wait to see how the meeting between him and his son will go. Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter.