rate_review Reviews

no typo's at all! I'm impressed. *pays homage to your bata and you for getting one.
It's sooooooo good to read a good story with out wincing over typos.
yeah, about that Sas. Good luck getting by Gaara. He's on seriously scary dude. Still, you gotta know Sas ain't gonna back off. He sorta stabbed himself in the hand with the whole rape bit though. I understand how he wouldn't have had a chance to court his mark but still, that sorta thing doesn't just roll off someones back. Worse yet, he doesn't seem to be able to see past his own selfishness to realize just how much damage he did.

This was so sweet! I loved reading about how the picture was taken of Yuudai as a baby and I liked hearing Gaara warn off Sasuke. And I forgot to mention before that I really like that Yuudai has whisker marks on his face. Sasuke is still super possessive of Naruto even though he's been gone fore 11 years. But really... did he expect Naruto to have no relationships after all that time? Dummy Sasuke! Gaara is obviously there for Naruto's birthday. I bet Sasuke doesn't even remember!

I started reading fanfics as a sasunaru fan and couldn't see Naruto with anyone else. But I've read enough now to have read some really great pairings with other characters so I don't automatically go rooting for Sasuke. But Sasuke really needs a wake up call on how bad he really treated Naruto! And I think everyone is wanting to pound that in to him lol. I really love this! It has so much depth to what's going on and how the characters feel. And I love Sasuke being his normal overconfident self. A Uchiha always gets what they want lol. But maybe not always!

I like not knowing what to expect. It's obvious he should be with Gaara but I can't help rooting for Sasuke too. Even though that rooting comes with a lot of groveling on his part. *sigh* I'm really bad I know.

I loved this! I thought the parts where Yuudai was annoying Kiba on purpose were just hilarious. And Kakashi getting stuck with Sasuke? lol I so laughed at poor Kakashi. It's going to be funny watching him plan for things for Sasuke to do. Kakashi can be pretty creative. Yuudai is figuring things out quick so it'll be interesting to see how he reacts to meeting or seeing Sasuke. And I wonder what his picture is going to be!?

And it was my pleasure to beta! :)

*fangirl squeal!!!* A chapter for me?! :) Thank you!!! :)

I do really love this story. I think you have a really solid unique storyline. I can't predict everything about it and it doesn't follow the typical 'Sasuke is a misunderstood jerk but Naruto forgives everything' format. I like those kinds too but I also like to sometimes not know what is going to happen lol.

And Naruto has a child from 2 of the people he has been closest to... and their ages are so perfect! 4 year olds are so cute and say the funniest things and Sasuke's son at ten would be old enough to pick up and understand a lot of things. Grandma Iruka? lol That's so cute.

And Sasuke's son is going to track him down! :) Oh does he have it coming... just wait... Sasuke's son has a mind of his own *giggle*

You know how much I like this story of yours... so I'm also going to offer to beta it if you want. Time is kicking my butt right now but I do get really excited when I see a chapter up lol I'd love to see others react the same way. You can email me at moodysavage@yahoo.com if your interested. But don't feel you have to or anything... I love this story regardless lol.

Thanks so much for the chapter!!! :)

That bastard. That miserable rat prick bastard. Odds on he'll only want his kid too, selfish prick. If he wasn't so selfish as to target Naru he might still have kept an amicable relationship with him... Still, i suppose he wanted to breed his heirs with the strongest and Naru is very strong.
I noticed a few typos. if you're not sure of the word meaning or tense, stick em in dictionary .com. considering you've already got three chappies out and there were only 2 or 3 typos that i noticed that's pretty damn good.

ahggghhh!!!! that was awesome! "miss me?" aarrggghhhhH!!!!! I soooo wanna' know. (now I'm excited... more to come!!!) :)

Damn that sasuke!

I feel like cackling with glee. Really I do. Sasuke being an over-confident ass and Naruto being a steaming mad hot head and both of them being stubborn. I love it! :) It's going to be really interesting to see what Sasuke has up his sleeve to try to smooth things over and how he reacts when Naruto doesn't cooperate. lol and he says he wants to repair the friendship... but what does he REALLY want. And 11 years have passed? Naruto's babies? Did he and Gaara have kids too or did he have twins with Sasuke?!?

SOoooo many questions lol.